Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your response does not answer the question and is not relevant. For Part 1 you should reply directly with a topic sentence that answers the question, then add one or two brief supporting details. Keep responses natural, short (up to 5 sentences), and use linking words if you add details. For example, say whether you had a bike, give when you had it and a short reason or memory.

例: Yes, I did have a bike when I was a child. I got it when I was seven and rode it to visit my friends every weekend, which helped me become more independent.

提案: Your answer directly addresses the question but is brief and lacks specific supporting details. Improve by adding a clear reason and an example, using a linking word to connect ideas. Use more precise vocabulary (e.g., "widespread," "commuting"). Keep it concise and natural.

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country today because many people use them for commuting and short trips. For instance, in my city there are bike lanes and bike-sharing schemes, so lots of young professionals choose cycling to avoid traffic.

× Hello.

✓ Yes, I did.

The student responded with 'Hello.' which does not answer the examiner's question 'Did you have a bike when you were a child?' This is a sentence structure/response error (type 26). Provide a brief past-tense answer to match the question: use 'Yes, I did.' or 'No, I didn't.' If adding detail, use past tense: 'Yes, I did; I had a bike when I was eight.'

× Yes, I think bikes are popular in our country today.

✓ Yes, I think bicycles are popular in my country today.

The sentence is generally grammatical, but two improvements are recommended: 1) 'bikes' is acceptable but 'bicycles' is more formal for speaking tests; 2) use 'my country' instead of 'our country' when speaking about the country of the speaker to make the reference clear. This is a present-tense declarative sentence (type 6). Suggestion: say 'Yes, I think bicycles are popular in my country today.'