Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Improve grammar (tense and articles), make the response more natural and slightly longer (1–3 sentences). Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one brief specific detail. Use past tense: 'I had' and 'bought'.

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My parents bought it for me on my seventh birthday, and I used to ride it to the park every weekend.

提案: Make the answer more natural and specific, avoid absolute words like 'all people', and use correct verb forms. Provide one or two concrete reasons or examples and link ideas with words like 'because' or 'for example'.

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them for exercise and short trips. For example, families often cycle together in parks or along rivers on weekends.

× Yes, I have a bike.

✓ Yes, I had a bike.

The examiner asked about the past ('when you were a child'), so the student should use past tense. Using 'have' (present) is inconsistent. Change to 'had' to match past time reference. Suggestion: Use past simple for habitual or possession in the past: 'I had a bike.'

× When I was a child my parents buy it for me.

✓ When I was a child my parents bought it for me.

The sentence refers to a past event, so the verb should be in past simple. 'Buy' is present; the correct past form is 'bought.' Suggestion: Use 'bought' for past simple: 'My parents bought it for me.'

× Yes, the bikes are popular in my country.

✓ Yes, bikes are popular in my country.

Using 'the' implies specific bikes already known, but the speaker refers to bikes in general. Omit the definite article to make a general statement. Suggestion: For general statements about plural nouns, use the plural without an article: 'Bikes are popular.'

× All people are going to the park and the play on their bike in the specific area there.

✓ Many people go to the park and ride their bikes in a specific area there.

Multiple issues: 'All people are going' is unnatural — use 'many people' or 'people' for general frequency. 'Are going' suggests a present continuous event; use simple present 'go' for habitual actions. 'The play on their bike' incorrectly uses 'play on' and 'bike' singular with 'their' — use 'ride their bikes.' 'The specific area there' is awkward; 'in a specific area there' or 'in a designated area' is clearer. Suggestion: Use simple present for habitual actions and correct verb collocation: 'People go to the park and ride their bikes in a designated area.'