Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Javobni aniq va grammatik jihatdan to‘g‘ri tuzing. Avvalo savolga qisqa va dolzarb mavzu jumlasi bilan javob bering (masalan, "Yes, I did"), keyin qisqa tushuntirish qo‘shing. Fe’llarning o‘tgan zamonda (past simple) ishlatilishiga eʼtibor bering, so‘z tartibi va prepozitsiyalarni to‘g‘ri joylashtiring. Gaplarni ortiqcha bo‘lmasdan 2–3 jumlada ifoda qiling va kerak bo‘lsa bog‘lovchi so‘zlardan (because, so, when) foydalaning.

例: Yes, I did. My father bought a bike for me when I was about eight years old because he wanted me to exercise and travel to school more easily.

提案: Javobni aniqroq fikr va aniq misollar bilan kengaytiring. Kirish jumlasida sodda mavzu gapini bering ("Yes, they are"), so‘ng sabablarni aniq bayon qiling va misol keltiring. To‘g‘ri so‘z tanlashga eʼtibor bering (masalan, "important" o‘rniga "popular" yoki "convenient"), hamda bog‘lovchi so‘zlardan (because, therefore, for example) foydalaning. Gaplar 2–3 jumladan oshmasin va grammatik jihatdan to‘g‘ri bo‘lsin.

例: Yes, they are. Bicycles are very popular because they are inexpensive and convenient for short trips; for example, many people use them to go to work or to the market in big cities.

× Yes, I have a bike.

✓ Yes, I had a bike.

The question uses past tense 'Did you have', so the response should also be in past tense. Use 'had' (past of 'have') to match the time frame. Suggestion: match verb tense to the question's time reference by using past simple: 'I had a bike.'

× When I was a child my dad for me by.

✓ When I was a child my dad bought one for me.

The original sentence is missing a main verb and has incorrect word order. The correct past-tense verb 'bought' is needed and the object should be clear ('one' referring to 'bike') with the preposition 'for me' after it. Suggestion: use complete subject-verb-object order and correct past tense: 'My dad bought one for me.'

× On the market.

✓ He bought it at the market.

'On the market' is an incomplete fragment and uses an incorrect preposition. Use a full sentence with correct preposition 'at' for a purchase location and include the subject and verb. Suggestion: combine with the previous sentence or make a full sentence: 'He bought it at the market.'

× Yes, the bikes are popular in my country because it's more important than other transports.

✓ Yes, bikes are popular in my country because they are more convenient than other means of transport.

Using 'the bikes' implies specific bikes; general statements about a category use no article: 'bikes'. 'It's' is unclear and singular while referring to plural 'bikes' so use 'they are'. 'More important' is semantically odd; likely intended meaning is 'more convenient'. 'Transports' is not the usual noun in this context; use 'means of transport' or 'other forms of transport'. Suggestion: use plural subject-verb agreement and natural collocations: 'bikes are popular' and 'more convenient than other means of transport.'