T-shirt— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 语法和时态混用，需要使用现在时表习惯；回答应更直接并用一到两句说明频率，再补充具体细节（如场合、原因或最近一次经历）。注意句子简洁、衔接词使用。举例：先说频率，然后用 because 或 last weekend 衔接具体例子。

例: I usually wear T-shirts several times a week because they are very comfortable. For example, last Sunday I went to a shopping mall with my friends and bought a few T-shirts for about CN¥500, which made me happy.

提案: 回答有重复且语法错误（动词搭配、时态和词形）。应先直接回答频率，再用一到两句给出原因和具体例子，使用连接词（because, so, for example）。注意名词复数和冠词。

例: Yes, I buy T-shirts quite often because I find them comfortable. For example, last Sunday I went to a popular shopping mall with friends and bought several T-shirts at a discount, so they were quite cheap.

提案: 回答未直接回应“时尚程度”，并且句子不通顺。应先给出评价（e.g. quite/very/not very fashionable），然后用一两句具体说明原因或例子，使用连接词（because, for example, in general）。避免无意义词汇。

例: T-shirts are quite popular among older people in my country because they are practical and comfortable. For example, many seniors wear T-shirts when they go for walks or shopping because they are easy to wash and wear.

提案: 回答不够礼貌且句子含糊，时态混用。应先直接回答过去习惯（Yes/No + frequency），然后解释原因并对比现在的喜好，使用清晰的连接词（but, however, because）。注意词汇和拼写（e.g. warm clothes, patterned shirts）。

例: Not really — when I was a child I usually wore warmer clothes like coats because they were more suitable for the weather. However, nowadays I prefer patterned T-shirts because they are comfortable and look nice.

× I usually wore T-shirts because I think T-shirt is very comfortable.

✓ I usually wear T-shirts because I think T-shirts are very comfortable.

句子使用现在习惯性动作，应使用一般现在时（不是过去时 wore）。另外名词数与冠词需要一致：复数形式“T-shirts”与主语一致，且形容词后面应使用复数动词“are”。建议：描述经常性行为用现在时，名词复数保持一致。

× Last Sunday I went to the shopping mall with my friends to buy T-shirts, about CN¥500, which was very pleasant.

✓ Last Sunday I went to the shopping mall with my friends to buy T-shirts that cost about CN¥500; it was very pleasant.

原句中“about CN¥500”位置不当，且从句结构混乱。应将价格放在修饰名词的位置（cost about CN¥500），并用分号或句子连接表达“那很愉快”。建议：把价格与要修饰的名词紧靠，分清主从句。

× I often buy T-shirt because I prefer T-shirt.

✓ I often buy T-shirts because I prefer T-shirts.

单复数不一致，且表示一般习惯应使用复数名词“T-shirts”。“T-shirt”需改为复数。建议：谈论习惯或种类时用复数形式。

× I think it is very comfortable.

✓ I think they are very comfortable.

前文指代复数“T-shirts”，代词与动词应使用复数“they are”。建议：代词和动词与先行词数保持一致。

× Last Sunday I went to the popular shopping mall with my friends buy T-shirt.

✓ Last Sunday I went to the popular shopping mall with my friends to buy T-shirts.

缺少不定式标记“to”连接目的状语“to buy”，且名词应为复数“T-shirts”。建议：表示目的用“to + 动词原形”。

× I there the shopping mall discount, so buy T-shirt is very cheap.

✓ There was a discount at the shopping mall, so T-shirts were very cheap.

原句语序和结构错误，应使用存在句“There was ...”来表达“有折扣”，并将后半句主语和动词改为复数形式以配合“T-shirts”。建议：表示“有……（存在）”用“There is/was ...”，注意时态和数的一致。

× How fashionable are T-shirts for older people in your country? Student: Yes, of course. In my country I think T-shirt is very popular for old people because I think it is very convenient.

✓ In my country I think T-shirts are very popular among old people because I think they are very comfortable.

回答中首句“Yes, of course.”对问题不恰当；“popular for old people”搭配不自然，应为“popular among old people”；“convenient”意义不合应为“comfortable”。另外名词与代词需保持复数一致。建议：使用“popular among”表达在某群体中受欢迎，选择恰当形容词。

× Was more earned by power runs, often by T-shirts to shopping mall.

✓ Older people often buy T-shirts when they go to the shopping mall.

原句语序混乱且不完整，无法理解。重写为清晰的主谓结构，表达“老年人常去购物中心买T恤”的意思。建议：确保句子有明确主语和谓语，按主-谓-宾顺序表达。

× Not really, why would children? I prefer warm dress because I think it is very beautiful and design.

✓ Not really. Why would children wear them? I preferred warm clothes when I was a child because I thought they were beautiful and well-designed.

回答关于过去的情况，应使用过去时（preferred, thought, were）。原句“why would children?”结构不完整，应补全“wear them”。“warm dress”与“design”搭配不当，应为“warm clothes”且“well-designed”。建议：谈及过去时使用一般过去时，注意词语搭配和完整句子。

× However, nowadays I like warty shirt because I think it's very comfort.

✓ However, nowadays I like sporty shirts because I think they're very comfortable.

原句单词“warty”拼写错误且不符合语义，应为“sporty”或其他形容词；“comfort”应为形容词“comfortable”；名词需用复数与现在习惯一致。建议：注意拼写和词类变化，形容词描述感觉用“-able”形式，名词数要一致。