T-shirt— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition, and add one specific detail. Use linking words to connect ideas and correct verb/adjective forms (e.g., 'keen on' → 'keen on wearing' or 'I like').

例: I wear T-shirts almost every day because I find them comfortable and easy to wear. For example, I prefer colorful cotton T-shirts for work and weekends because they are breathable and low-maintenance.

提案: Give a clear, grammatical frequency and a specific reason. Avoid filler words and unclear phrases like 'two once a week' and 'T-shirt is really weak.' Use linking words to explain cause and effect.

例: Yes, I buy T-shirts fairly often — about once every two weeks — because I wear them daily and they wear out quickly. Also, I spill food sometimes, so I need replacements more often.

提案: Provide a complete, coherent answer with comparisons and specific trends. Avoid sentence fragments. Use linking words ('however', 'nowadays') and give a concrete example or reason.

例: T-shirts are quite popular among older people in my city because they are comfortable and practical. However, in the past senior citizens preferred formal clothes like suits for church, but nowadays many choose casual T-shirts for daily outings and family visits.

提案: Answer directly and use past tense correctly. Remove unclear phrases ('AT shirt', 'lad T-shirt') and give a brief specific example or memory. Use linking words to connect the reason.

例: Yes, I often wore T-shirts as a child because my mother liked dressing me in cute, colorful shirts. For example, she would pick cartoon-printed T-shirts for me to wear on weekends because they looked cheerful.

× I usually wear my T-shirts every day because I really keen on wearing a colorful T-shirt and it is really convenient, comfortable and convenient for me which is why I love T-shirt.

✓ I usually wear T-shirts every day because I am really keen on wearing colorful T-shirts and they are convenient and comfortable for me, which is why I love them.

The sentence misuses adjectives/adverbs and has repetition. 'keen' requires the verb 'to be' (am keen on). Use plural consistent noun 'T-shirts' and plural pronoun 'they' to refer back. Remove duplicate 'convenient' and add commas for clarity. Suggestion: use 'I am keen on' and match plural nouns and pronouns.

× Absolutely yes. I usually buy umm my T-shirts at least two once a week because T-shirt is really weak and I'm a bit clumsy so sometimes.

✓ Absolutely yes. I usually buy my T-shirts at least twice a week because T-shirts wear out easily and I'm a bit clumsy sometimes.

Errors: 'two once a week' is incorrect — use 'twice a week'. 'T-shirt is really weak' is unidiomatic; use 'T-shirts wear out' or 'are not very durable'. Use plural 'T-shirts' consistently. Remove filler 'umm' in written form. Suggestion: say 'twice a week' and 'wear out' or 'are not very durable'.

× In my city, elderly people like T-shirts because it is really comfortable. To be honest.

✓ In my city, elderly people like T-shirts because they are really comfortable, to be honest.

Pronoun 'it' incorrectly refers to plural 'T-shirts' — use 'they'. 'To be honest' should attach to the sentence and not stand alone. Also use 'are' for plural.

× In the past elderly really like church or suit, but nowadays elderly people.

✓ In the past, elderly people really liked wearing shirts or suits, but nowadays they prefer more casual clothes like T-shirts.

Tense mismatch: 'in the past' requires past tense 'liked' not present 'like'. Also sentence fragment 'but nowadays elderly people.' incomplete; complete thought needed. 'Church or suit' is unclear — likely 'shirts or suits'. Suggestion: use past tense and complete the contrast with 'nowadays'.

× Absolutely yes. I used to wear AT shirt because my mom was really like T-shirt, especially my lad T-shirt because my mom said oh looks, it looks really cute.

✓ Absolutely. I used to wear a T-shirt when I was a child because my mom really liked T-shirts, especially my little T-shirt, because my mom said it looked really cute.

Multiple issues: 'AT shirt' is incorrect — should be 'a T-shirt'. 'was really like' should be 'really liked' (past tense). 'my lad T-shirt' unclear — likely 'my little T-shirt'. Quotation 'oh looks, it looks' should be smoothed to 'because my mom said it looked really cute.' Use past tense consistently: 'used to' + past 'liked' and 'looked'.