Advertisement— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Is there an advertisement that made an impression on you when you were a child?
受験者
Yes, there is. I remember a heartwarming advertisement that was about, umm, family bonds. It shows a boy helping his mother, washing her feet, and this tender moment made this advert very touching.
試験官
Do you see a lot of advertising on trains or other transport?
受験者
Yes, Ioffer you many advertisements on public transportation like trains, buses and or in subways. Many of them are charity or public service ads and while the other usually promotes cosmetic products which are very eye-catching and changes free free.
試験官
Do you like advertisements?
受験者
Yes I do. I find modern advertisements very attention grabbing and visually vibrant, so they're hard to forget. For instance, many ads usually use catchy music or humour, which helps them stick in my mind long after I've seen them.
試験官
What kind of advertising do you like?
受験者
I prefer creative and informative advertising that tells a short story or uses humour. Umm for example a while a well made TV or online ads with clever clever visuals and a clear message catches my attention because it intends me while explaining why the product is useful.
試験官
Do you often see advertisements when you are on your phone or computer?
受験者
Yes, I do often see them like when I play the video games, some of advertisements just popped out umm and even even if when I look through the website there were also there are also many advertisements.
評価
総合
Part 1
Is there an advertisement that made an impression on you when you were a child?
スコア: 78.0提案: 你的回答内容相关且有情感描绘，但存在口头语（如“umm”）和细节展开不足的问题。建议：1) 去掉多余的填充词，使表达更自然；2) 在一两句话内补充具体细节（例如广告的品牌、场景或你当时的感受）；3) 使用连词连接句子以提高连贯性。示例练习句型：先给出主题句，然后用because/which/so连接具体细节和个人感受。
例: Yes. I remember a touching advertisement about family bonds that showed a young boy washing his mother's feet, which highlighted respect and gratitude. It was made by a local detergent brand and used soft music and close-up shots to create an emotional atmosphere, so I felt moved and remembered it for years.
Do you see a lot of advertising on trains or other transport?
スコア: 60.0提案: 回答存在语法和词汇错误（如‘Ioffer you’,重复和用词不当），影响清晰度。建议：1) 使用正确的句子结构并避免重复；2) 用具体分类和例子说明不同类型广告的位置和特点；3) 用连接词（for example, while, and）组织对比。
例: Yes, I see many advertisements on trains, buses and in subway stations. For example, charity and public service posters often appear on station walls, while bright, eye-catching cosmetic ads are placed inside carriages to attract passengers' attention.
Do you like advertisements?
スコア: 82.0提案: 回答清晰且结构较好，但可以更简洁并增加具体评价或个人感受。建议：1) 合理控制句子长度（最多5句）；2) 用more precise vocabulary代替重复词（例如 vivid, memorable）；3) 加一两处连接词增强逻辑。
例: Yes, I do. I find modern advertisements very vivid and memorable because they often use catchy music and clever humour. As a result, certain jingles or funny scenes stay in my mind long after I've seen the ad.
What kind of advertising do you like?
スコア: 65.0提案: 回答表达出偏好但存在语法错误、重复和不连贯问题（如“intends me”）。建议：1) 去掉填充词并修正语法；2) 用清晰句子解释原因并举具体例子；3) 使用连接词（for example, because）使逻辑顺畅。
例: I prefer creative, informative ads that tell a short story or use humour because they both entertain and explain the product's benefits. For example, a well-made online video ad with clever visuals and a clear message is likely to catch my attention and make me remember the product.
Do you often see advertisements when you are on your phone or computer?
スコア: 55.0提案: 回答存在多处重复、填充词和时态/语法错误，影响表达流畅度。建议：1) 去掉重复与填充词，使用正确时态；2) 用简洁句子说明具体场景（例如游戏、社交媒体、浏览器弹窗）；3) 可补充对这些广告的态度或影响。
例: Yes, I often see ads on my phone and computer. For example, ads pop up during mobile games, autoplay before online videos, and appear as banners on websites, which can be quite distracting.
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