Gifts— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答要更直接并注意时态和词汇搭配。可以先用一句主题句说明自己是否擅长送礼，然后用一两句具体细节支持。避免冗长或重复，注意把“birthday gift”改为“birthday gifts”，将“made me so happy that I can give them some surprise”改为更自然的表达。

例: Yes, I’m quite good at giving gifts. I send birthday gifts to my friends and family every year because I enjoy choosing things they’ll like, and seeing their surprised reactions makes me really happy.

提案: 回答要更简洁、用词准确，并使用连词使句子更连贯。把“some someday special”改为“special occasions”，把“the holiday”改为“holidays”。

例: I usually give gifts on special occasions, mainly birthdays, holidays, and events like weddings.

提案: 需要更清晰地表达主旨并用更自然的语法。主题句应说明会考虑对方的喜好和兴趣，然后用具体例子支持。避免口头填充词（uh）和语法错误（例如“the person will receive the gift, whether like it”应为“whether they will like it”）。

例: I always consider the recipient’s tastes and interests first, because a gift should be something they actually like. For example, last month I bought my sister a doll from her favorite brand because I knew she collects them.

提案: 回答要用正确的时态和更清晰的句子结构，避免重复的语气词（umm）。说明具体时间、制作的内容和送礼对象时要注意礼貌和表达的适当性（例如“ex boyfriends”可以改为“friends”或明确说明过去关系）。

例: Yes, last year I baked biscuits and cookies myself and gave them as Valentine’s Day gifts to some friends; we shared the snacks together.

提案: 表达观点清晰但需改进语法与词汇搭配，例如“receptions”应为“recipients”，避免重复词汇并使用连词使句子更流畅。可以简短说明原因并给出例子。

例: No, I don’t think so. Whether a gift shows my feelings depends on my relationship with the recipient, not its price; a thoughtful handmade present can be more meaningful than something expensive.

× I send my friends and families the birthday gift every year and I enjoy selecting gifts for them.

✓ I send my friends and family birthday gifts every year, and I enjoy selecting gifts for them.

句中“friends and families”使用不当。當談論多個朋友和家庭成員時，通常用複數“friends and family”或“friends and families”視語境而定，但常用搭配是“friends and family”。此外“the birthday gift”應改為複數“birthday gifts”，因為每年為多位不同的人送多件禮物。建議使用固定搭配“friends and family”並將名詞改為複數以匹配語境。

× This process made me so happy that I can give them some surprise.

✓ This process makes me so happy that I can give them some surprises.

原句時態不一致且名詞單複數錯用。根據上下文應使用現在時表習慣或持續感受，故將“made”改為現在時“makes”。另外“some surprise”應為可數複數“some surprises”。建議保持時態一致並正確使用可數名詞的單複數形式。

× Well, most of the time I give gifts to others at their birthdays or some someday special such as the holiday or someone's wedding.

✓ Well, most of the time I give gifts to others on their birthdays or on special days such as holidays or someone's wedding.

“at their birthdays”介詞應為“on”表示在某天；“some someday special”是不自然的搭配，應改為“special days”。“the holiday”應為複數“holidays”或無冠詞“holidays”。建議使用正確介詞“on”和自然搭配“special days/holidays”。

× Well, in my opinion, the most important factor is the person will receive the gift, whether like it.

✓ Well, in my opinion, the most important factor is whether the person who will receive the gift will like it.

原句語序混亂，關係從句缺失“who”且“whether”應引導整個從句。應把“whether”提前並用“who will receive the gift”作為定語從句，保持結構清晰。建議重組句子以正確使用關係代詞和連詞。

× For example, I built my sister uh doll last month just because she likes that brand.

✓ For example, I made my sister a doll last month just because she likes that brand.

“built”用於建造大型物體，不適合描述製作玩偶，應用“made”。此外“built my sister uh doll”缺少間接賓語結構，正確表達為“made my sister a doll”。建議選擇語義更合適的動詞並使用正確的賓語順序。

× Umm yes, I did some biscuits and cookies by myself umm last year and take them as a gift of Valentine's Day to send to my ex boyfriends and we share the snacks.

✓ Umm yes, I made some biscuits and cookies myself last year and took them as Valentine's Day gifts to send to my ex-boyfriends, and we shared the snacks.

句中時態不一致：先用過去時“did/made”，後面卻用現在時“take”。應全句用過去時，故“take”改為“took”。“did some biscuits and cookies”應改為“made”。“a gift of Valentine's Day”也不自然，改為“Valentine's Day gifts”。“ex boyfriends”應有連字符“ex-boyfriends”。最後動詞“share”需改為過去式“shared”。建議保持時態一致並使用自然搭配。

× Well, I don't think so. The things that the gifts can express just depends on the relationships between the receptions and me.

✓ Well, I don't think so. What gifts can express just depends on the relationship between the recipients and me.

“The things that the gifts can express”表達笨拙，可簡化為“What gifts can express”。“depends on the relationships between the receptions and me”中“receptions”用詞錯誤（reception為接待或歡迎會），應為“recipients”。“relationships”在此可用單數“relationship”或複數視語境，但通常說“the relationship between the recipients and me”。建議使用正確詞彙“recipients”並改寫為更自然的表達。

× And I don't want to express my feeling and emotion by the price of the gift.

✓ And I don't want to express my feelings or emotions by the price of the gift.

“feeling and emotion”重複概念，應使用複數“feelings”或“emotions”，並用“or”連接更自然。“express ... by the price”語法上可接受，但需注意名詞形式一致。建議使用複數形式並避免詞義重複。