Shopping— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Make your answer clear and natural by using a topic sentence followed by specific examples and correct word choice. Avoid spelling/grammar errors and unnecessary words. Keep it to 2–3 concise sentences. For example, say what types of shopping you enjoy and give one or two specific items and reasons.

例: Yes, I enjoy shopping, especially for sportswear. For instance, I often buy trainers and boots because I exercise regularly and need durable shoes. I also like picking up tea leaves when I visit specialty stores.

提案: Give a direct topic sentence and then a clear reason. Use correct grammar (subject-verb agreement, negatives) and linking words to explain why or why not. Keep it to 1–2 sentences and be specific about your habits.

例: No, I don't usually compare prices because I prefer to buy from stores I trust. However, when I shop online for electronics, I always compare prices to find the best deal.

提案: Answer directly, then give a brief specific example. Use correct verbs and tense, avoid fillers, and use linking words for clarity. Make the supporting detail relevant to the question (explain why choices are easy or difficult).

例: No, it's not difficult for me to make choices because I know what I need. For example, when I go shopping I quickly pick toiletries like soap and toothpaste since I have preferred brands.

提案: Provide a clear opinion and then support it with reasons or an example. Avoid hesitations and use precise vocabulary (e.g., "luxury goods" instead of unclear phrases). You can also acknowledge the opposite to show balance. Keep it within 2–3 sentences.

例: I don't think expensive products are always better. While luxury goods can have higher quality, cheaper items can offer good value; for example, some affordable electronics perform as well as premium brands for everyday use.

× Yes I do. I am willing to buy sport quarter and boots.

✓ Yes, I do. I am willing to buy sportswear and boots.

The original uses incorrect or missing articles and wrong noun forms. 'sport quarter' is ungrammatical; likely intended 'sportswear' or 'a sports jacket'. Replace with the correct noun 'sportswear'. Add a comma after 'Yes'. Use 'a' only if a singular count noun is intended (for example, 'a sports jacket'). Suggestion: choose the precise item (e.g. 'a sports jacket' or 'sportswear') and include articles as needed.

× Beside I often buy teasers.

✓ Besides, I often buy tissues.

'Beside' is the wrong preposition; 'besides' (meaning 'in addition') is correct. 'Teasers' is likely a wrong word choice; context suggests 'tissues' or 'teasers' is unlikely when shopping. Add a comma after 'Besides'. Suggestion: verify intended item and use 'besides' to add information.

× Nor does I don't a habit.

✓ No, I don't. It's not a habit.

The sentence mixes negative constructions and has subject-verb disagreement. 'Nor does I don't a habit' is ungrammatical. Use 'No, I don't' to answer negatively. To state it's not a habit, use 'It's not a habit.' Suggestion: keep one negative structure and ensure subject-verb agreement ('I don't', 'it is').

× No it isn't. Uh, I usually choice soap when I uh, started go to shopping.

✓ No, it isn't. I usually choose soap when I start going shopping.

Multiple structural and verb form errors: 'choice' is a noun; the correct verb is 'choose'. 'Started go to shopping' mixes past and base forms incorrectly. Use present tense 'start' to match habitual action: 'start going shopping' or 'go shopping'. Add commas after introductory 'No' and remove filler 'uh' in formal speech. Suggestion: use 'I usually choose soap when I go shopping' or 'when I start going shopping' depending on intended meaning.

× Yes I do uh, I think uh, dessert luxury, uh, own way better than uh, cheap.

✓ Yes, I do. I think designer luxury items are always better than cheap ones.

The original has wrong word choice and adjective order: 'dessert luxury' is incorrect; likely 'designer' or 'desert' is wrong. 'own way better than cheap' is ungrammatical. Use 'designer luxury items' or 'luxury items' and compare with 'cheap ones'. Add 'always' only if intended. Maintain plural 'ones' for countable items. Suggestion: clarify intended meaning (e.g. 'designer luxury items are better than cheap ones') and use correct nouns and plural forms.