Work— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 句子有语法错误和用词不准（例如 'still is a student', 'polio associates'），信息可以更简洁。建议使用简单正确的句型开头直接回答，然后补充学校和专业细节，注意时态和冠词，并把句子控制在3-4句内。

예시: I'm a student. I study Human Resource Management at the Polytechnic College and I'm in my first year. Currently I am taking five core subjects related to HR.

제안: 未直接回答“Where do you work?”并且时态混乱（used 'studied' vs 'study'）。建议先澄清自己不工作而是学习，然后简洁说明学校和学习内容，使用连接词使表达连贯。

예시: I don't work at the moment; I'm a student at Hong Kong Community College. I study Human Resource Management and I'm currently taking five subjects in my program.

제안: 回答重复且有语法错误（如 'my school have' 应为 'has'，表达不清 'free floor'）。建议先给出明确判断，然后用一到两句具体例子支持，使用连词提高连贯性。注意单复数和名词使用。

예시: Yes, it's a good place to study. For example, the school has excellent facilities such as a large library with quiet study floors and spacious study rooms for students.

제안: 表达较清晰但有语法和词序问题（如 'I very like', 'here have'），以及用词口语化（'yummy'）。建议使用更自然的固定搭配，简洁列出两个喜欢的理由并用连接词关联。

예시: Yes, I like it here a lot because the school has a well-equipped gym where I usually work out. I also enjoy the canteen because the food is affordable and tastes good.

제안: 语法错误（'plans is', 'I interested in it'），表达不够具体。建议先明确未来计划（继续升学或工作），说明具体专业和原因，并给出一两个具体目标或国家，句子不宜过长。

예시: I plan to continue my studies at a polytechnic university and major in Hotel Management because I'm interested in hospitality. After graduating, I hope to work internationally and gain experience in countries like the UK.

× And I still is a student and I study in polio associates and I'm learning a human resource management now and I am year one.

✓ And I am still a student. I study at Poly Associates and I'm studying Human Resource Management now. I am in my first year.

该句存在主谓一致错误（“I still is a student”应为“I am still a student”）。另外有介词使用和词形搭配问题（“study in polio associates”改为“study at Poly Associates”；“learning a human resource management”改为“studying Human Resource Management”；“I am year one”改为“I am in my first year”）。建议：注意主语“I”后动词用“am”；机构或学校前通常用介词“at”；学科名称前不用不定冠词；表示年级用“in my first year”。（简体中文）

× Actually, I studied in Hong Kong Community College. And I study human resource management now and I need to learn 5 subjects.

✓ Actually, I studied at Hong Kong Community College. I am studying Human Resource Management now and I need to take five subjects.

“studied in Hong Kong Community College”中介词应为“at”，这是介词使用问题并涉及过去时的地点表达；“study human resource management now”时态应为现在进行时以表示正在学习；“learn 5 subjects”用法不自然，改为“take five subjects”。建议：表示现在进行的动作用现在进行时；数字在正式书写中用词式；注意介词搭配。（简体中文）

× Yes of course. Umm my school have very good equipment uh for example library, library have a free floor, have very big room for student to study along.

✓ Yes, of course. Umm, my school has very good facilities. For example, the library has a free floor and very big rooms for students to study in.

句中主谓不一致（“my school have”应为“my school has”；“library have”应为“the library has”）。另外名词单复数和冠词使用也有问题（“equipment”可用“facilities”，“room”应复数“rooms”；“student”应复数“students”；需在“library”前加定冠词“the”）。建议：第三人称单数主语（my school/the library）后动词用单数形式“has”；注意名词单复数和冠词使用，以及介词短语结尾用“study in”。（简体中文）

× Yes actually I very like here because here have gym room for student and I usually go to gym room to train my fitness and also I like canteen of the school because the food is so yummy and cost effective.

✓ Yes, actually I really like it here because there is a gym for students and I usually go to the gym to train. I also like the school canteen because the food is tasty and affordable.

句中代词与结构使用不当（“I very like”应为“I really like”；“here have gym room”应为“there is a gym”或“there is a gym room”；“for student”应为“for students”；“go to gym room”应为“go to the gym”；“I like canteen of the school”应为“I like the school canteen”）。建议：英语中“喜欢”通常用“like”或“really like”；表示存在用“There is/are”；注意复数和定冠词使用；用更自然的词如“tasty, affordable”替换口语词“yummy, cost effective”。（简体中文）

× My future work plans is I would want to study in Poly university to study hotel management because I interested in it and I want to uh travel many countries such as UK.

✓ My future work plan is that I want to study Hotel Management at PolyU because I am interested in it and I want to travel to many countries such as the UK.

句中主谓不一致（“My future work plans is”应为“My future work plan is”或“My future plans are”）。时态和动词形式问题（“I interested in it”应为“I am interested in it”）。介词和冠词使用也有错误（“study in Poly university”应为“study at PolyU”；“travel many countries”应为“travel to many countries”；“such as UK”前应有定冠词“the UK”）。建议：主谓配对要一致；表示兴趣用“be interested in”；固定搭配“study at”、“travel to”；国家名前常用定冠词如“the UK”。（简体中文）