Puzzles— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be concise and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one specific supporting detail. Correct verb forms and articles (e.g., “my mom provided me with many puzzle boxes”). Avoid repetition.

예시: Yes. My mother provided me with many puzzle boxes when I was a child, so I spent hours solving jigsaw and logic puzzles on weekends.

제안: Answer directly, then give one clear reason using a linking word (e.g., “because” or “so”). Use more natural phrasing like “it entertains me” or “keeps my mind active.” Avoid vague expressions such as “a lot of interest.”

예시: I usually do puzzles when I feel bored because they entertain me and keep my mind active during slow moments.

제안: Give a clear preference statement, then explain with a specific reason. Use correct grammar: singular/plural, verb forms and prepositions (e.g., “I prefer word puzzles because I’m better at language-based problems”). Keep to two or three sentences and use linking words like “because” or “however.”

예시: I prefer word puzzles because I’m stronger at vocabulary and pattern recognition, whereas number puzzles feel harder for me.

제안: Answer directly, then support with a specific reason and correct conditional phrasing. Avoid awkward words like “suffers.” Use linking words (e.g., “therefore,” “for example”). Mention a concrete benefit such as improved memory or delayed cognitive decline.

예시: Yes. Research suggests that regularly doing puzzles can help maintain memory and cognitive function in older adults, so puzzles are beneficial for them.

× Yes, in my childhood I met a lot of puzzles because my mom provide me a lot of box of puzzles when I were a child.

✓ Yes, in my childhood I encountered a lot of puzzles because my mom provided me with many boxes of puzzles when I was a child.

Errors: 'met a lot of puzzles' is incorrect verb collocation and 'a lot of box of puzzles' uses singular 'box' with 'a lot of' and wrong quantifier; 'provide' should be past tense 'provided'; 'when I were a child' has wrong verb form 'were'. Suggestion: Use 'encountered' or 'did' for experiencing puzzles, use plural 'boxes' and 'many' to match countable noun, use past tense consistently ('provided', 'was').

× Yeah, I do a lot of puzzles when I'm bored because it gives me a lot of interest.

✓ Yeah, I do a lot of puzzles when I'm bored because they interest me a lot.

Errors: 'it gives me a lot of interest' uses singular 'it' while referring to plural 'puzzles' and unnatural phrasing. Use third person plural pronoun 'they' to match plural subject and verb agreement, and use 'interest me' for natural expression. Maintain present habitual tense.

× Both of them is so difficult but it depends which skills you have.

✓ Both of them are so difficult, but it depends on which skills you have.

Errors: 'Both of them is' uses singular verb 'is' with plural subject 'both'; missing preposition 'on' after 'depends'. Fix subject-verb agreement to 'are' and add 'on' for correct phrasal verb 'depend on'.

× So for me I've prefer make words puzzles because in these things I'm more success.

✓ So for me I prefer making word puzzles because in these activities I am more successful.

Errors: 'I've prefer' mixes present perfect with base verb; use simple present 'I prefer'. Verb pattern requires gerund: 'prefer making'. 'make words puzzles' incorrect noun order; use 'word puzzles'. 'I'm more success' uses adjective 'success' instead of adjective 'successful'. Also 'in these things' is vague; 'in these activities' clearer.

× Yes, some scientists say that if you will always train your brain, you will maybe protect yourself from many suffers.

✓ Yes, some scientists say that if you always train your brain, you may protect yourself from many ailments.

Errors: In conditional sentences, avoid 'will' in the if-clause; use present simple 'if you always train'. 'Will maybe' is awkward; use modal 'may' or 'might' before main verb. 'Suffers' is incorrect noun; use 'ailments' or 'sufferings' depending on meaning. Also 'always train your brain' placed correctly.

× So puzzles always makes your brain work a lot.

✓ So puzzles always make your brain work a lot.

Errors: 'puzzles' plural requires verb 'make' not 'makes'. Ensure subject-verb agreement. The rest of the sentence is acceptable; consider 'work hard' as a more natural alternative.

× So I think it's so good for old people.

✓ So I think it's very good for older people.

Errors: 'so good' is colloquial; 'very good' more appropriate. Use 'older people' or 'older adults' rather than 'old people' for polite expression. Tense is present and appropriate.