Writing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Cải thiện ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu để trả lời rõ ràng hơn; rút gọn để tự nhiên và tránh lặp ý. Sử dụng một câu chủ đề trực tiếp và 1–2 câu bổ sung với liên từ phù hợp (because, and, so). Chú ý chia động từ và mạo từ (a/an/the).

예시: Yes, I write fairly often. At school I always take notes to record important information from my teachers, and in my free time I make plans and to‑do lists to organise my study and daily tasks.

제안: Sắp xếp ý rõ ràng: bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề nêu loại viết, sau đó giải thích lý do với chi tiết cụ thể. Tránh từ sai (ví dụ "shut up story") và dùng danh sách ngắn gọn. Chú ý thì và danh từ (writing, diary, short stories).

예시: I like writing personal things, mainly diary entries and short stories. Writing helps me relax and reflect on daily events, and keeping a diary means I can remember important moments with family and friends.

제안: Nên trả lời trực tiếp rồi giải thích với ví dụ cụ thể. Tránh lặp câu; dùng liên từ (because, so, when) chính xác và chia động từ đúng. Làm rõ điều bạn muốn nói về sự thay đổi theo thời gian.

예시: Yes, I think my writing will change over time because it reflects my life and opinions. For example, diary entries from my teenage years will look different from those I write in my twenties as my experiences and priorities change.

제안: Trả lời trực tiếp (I prefer...) rồi nêu 1–2 lý do cụ thể. Sử dụng cấu trúc câu đúng và từ vựng phù hợp (handwriting, coloured pens, remember, remember important tasks).

예시: I prefer handwriting because I enjoy using coloured pens to organise my notes. Writing by hand helps me remember important tasks and study more effectively.

제안: Nói rõ tần suất rồi giải thích mục đích ngắn gọn. Sử dụng từ đúng (plan, review) và tránh các cụm từ lặp. Một hoặc hai câu là đủ.

예시: I usually write in my diary at weekends when I have more free time. I use that time to review my week and make a plan for the next week.

제안: Trả lời trực tiếp và giải thích rõ phương pháp khác (photography, apps). Tránh câu lộn xộn; sử dụng cấu trúc đơn giản và mô tả ngắn về lý do (memories, visuals).

예시: I often take photographs with my phone to record important moments. Photos are more effective and beautiful for me because they capture different backgrounds and emotions that words cannot fully describe.

× Yes, of course, when I study in my school, we must take note or notebook to record important information and knowledge which is the teacher teaching for student and moreover my free time, I often write to make a planned.

✓ Yes, of course. When I am studying at school, we must take notes or bring a notebook to record important information and the knowledge that the teacher teaches us. Moreover, in my free time, I often write to make plans.

The sentence uses inconsistent tenses and incorrect verb forms (study vs am studying; take note vs take notes). Use present continuous 'am studying' for ongoing action and simple present 'teaches' for habitual action. Plural nouns (notes) and correct object pronoun 'us' are needed. Also split into shorter sentences for clarity.

× Yes of course writing is a good way have me relax and gain more knowledge.

✓ Yes, of course. Writing is a good way to help me relax and gain more knowledge.

Missing 'to' before the infinitive and incorrect verb phrase 'have me relax'. Use 'to help me relax' or 'helps me relax'. gerund 'Writing' as subject is correct.

× I often writing diary, shut up story, daily life, friends in my family to record my life.

✓ I often write in my diary about short stories, my daily life, and my friends and family to record my life.

Use base form 'write' after adverb 'often' (not 'writing'). 'Diary' requires preposition 'in'. 'Shut up story' appears to be 'short stories'. Use parallel noun phrases and proper prepositions.

× I never forgot this.

✓ I never forget this.

The context describes an ongoing habit or memory, so simple present 'never forget' is appropriate, not past 'forgot'.

× Yes, because I write about my daily life and when we grow up it's has many change in the future.

✓ Yes, because I write about my daily life, and when we grow up there will be many changes in the future.

Incorrect use of 'it's has' and singular 'change'. Use 'there will be' for future reference and plural 'changes'. Maintain tense consistency.

× So I write to this when I see when I see this I can feel the changes.

✓ So I write these things; when I read them later I can see and feel the changes.

Awkward repetition 'when I see when I see' and unclear object 'this'. Rephrase for clarity and correct verb choice 'read' for reviewing past writing.

× I prefer handwriting when I writing because I very enjoy write by color paint.

✓ I prefer handwriting when I write because I really enjoy writing with colored pens.

Use base 'write' after 'when I', and 'enjoy' should be followed by gerund 'writing'. 'Color paint' is unnatural for writing; 'colored pens' is appropriate.

× This have me can remember the important tasks and can gained knowledge to study more effectively.

✓ This helps me remember important tasks and gain knowledge to study more effectively.

Incorrect subject-verb agreement 'This have' (should be 'This helps'). 'can gained' mixes modal and past participle; use 'gain'. Pronoun use corrected and simplified.

× I often write diary on the weekend when I have free time to seize everything in the week and I often to make a new plant for to do a new week next week.

✓ I often write in my diary on the weekend when I have free time to review everything from the week, and I often make a new plan for the next week.

Use 'write in my diary', 'review' instead of 'seize', remove unnecessary 'to' in 'often to make', and 'plan' instead of 'plant'. Maintain present simple for habitual action.

× Yes, I often photograph because I very like record everything by my phone I can't see is in the different background instead of just in major this more effectively and beautiful.

✓ Yes, I often take photographs because I really like recording everything with my phone. I can capture different backgrounds instead of only major scenes, which makes the photos more effective and beautiful.

Use 'take photographs' or 'take photos' and 'with my phone' for the instrument. 'Very like' -> 'really like'. Split into sentences, correct word order, and replace unclear phrases with clear alternatives ('capture different backgrounds', 'only major scenes').