Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Cải thiện sự tự nhiên và ngắn gọn; tránh câu quá dài và lặp từ. Nên bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề rõ ràng, rồi cung cấp 1-2 chi tiết hỗ trợ ngắn gọn, sử dụng liên từ hợp lý.

예시: Not really. I usually prefer quiet activities like playing board games or watching movies with friends because I find them more relaxing than long conversations.

제안: Giảm tiếng ồn lời nói lặp (uh, about about) và cấu trúc câu rõ ràng hơn. Hãy nêu chủ đề chính, sau đó liệt kê 2-3 ví dụ cụ thể, dùng liên từ để mạch lạc.

예시: We usually talk about everyday life, like what we did during the week. We also share personal news, such as relationships or problems we’re facing, and give each other advice.

제안: Sửa ngữ pháp và trật tự từ; tránh chỗ trống ("give me an"). Bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề ngắn, rồi giải thích lợi ích cụ thể của việc trò chuyện nhóm, dùng từ nối.

예시: I prefer talking in a group because I get different perspectives and more advice when I have a problem, which helps me make better decisions.

제안: Giảm lặp từ và chỉnh ngữ pháp (put your eyes on your phone → staring at your phone). Nên nêu lý do rõ ràng và đưa 1 ví dụ ngắn về lợi ích khi gặp trực tiếp.

예시: I prefer face-to-face communication because it feels more natural and engaging. For example, when we meet in person we can read facial expressions and enjoy activities together, which makes conversations livelier.

제안: Tránh diễn đạt mơ hồ. Trình bày rõ ràng: có tranh cãi không, tại sao, và cách giải quyết. Dùng thì phù hợp và tránh lặp từ.

예시: Yes, we sometimes argue, but only to sort out misunderstandings. We usually discuss the issue calmly, give each other advice, and then reconcile so the friendship stays strong.

× No, I prefer spending time alone or doing activities that don't involve much talking because I enjoy more structured activities with friends, like playing games or watching movies rather than chatting.

✓ No, I prefer spending time alone or doing activities that don't involve much talking because I enjoy more structured activities with friends, such as playing games or watching movies rather than chatting.

Use 'such as' instead of 'like' for examples in formal speech; this is stylistic rather than a strict grammar rule but improves clarity. Also keep gerund forms 'spending', 'doing', 'playing', 'watching' consistent. Suggestion: use 'such as' for clearer examples in this context.

× We often talk about about the daily life or what we have done in the previous week, or we can share by the small thing about uh, about their lover, their friends, the issue they have made in their life and whatever they want to talk.

✓ We often talk about daily life or what we have done in the previous week, or we share small things about their partner, their friends, problems they have had in their lives and whatever they want to talk about.

Remove duplicate 'about' and do not use 'share by'; the correct preposition is 'about' at the end for 'whatever they want to talk about'. Use 'partner' instead of 'lover' for neutral tone. Use 'problems they have had' (present perfect) to indicate issues occurring before now. Suggestions: avoid repeated prepositions and place 'about' correctly at phrase ends when necessary.

× I prefer to chat with a group of friends because I think when I have a problem they can give me an and they can give me some advice. Yes and I can receives many type of opinions and it can help me later.

✓ I prefer to chat with a group of friends because I think when I have a problem they can give me advice. Yes, and I can receive many types of opinions and it can help me later.

Remove extraneous 'an'. Use base form 'receive' after modal/auxiliary context; third person singular 'receives' is incorrect because subject 'I' requires 'receive'. Also pluralize 'type' to 'types' or better 'kinds' when referring to multiple opinions. Suggestion: match verb forms to subject and remove unnecessary words.

× I prefer to communicate face to face because I find it more interesting instead of just put your eyes on your phone and chat with their friends.

✓ I prefer to communicate face to face because I find it more interesting than just staring at your phone and chatting with friends.

Use comparative 'more interesting than' not 'instead of just'. Use 'staring at' or 'looking at' rather than 'put your eyes on'. Use consistent pronouns: avoid mixing 'your' and 'their'; use 'your' or 'friends' generically. Suggestion: use correct comparative structure and appropriate verb+'preposition' collocations.

× Instead of that we can we can hang out and talk face to face.

✓ Instead of that, we can hang out and talk face to face.

Remove duplicate 'we can'. This is a redundancy error rather than tense, but corrected by deleting the repeated phrase. Suggestion: read aloud to catch repeated words.

× Yes, but really because I don't want to break my friendship when they have a problem, we will give some advice and my friends will will fix the mistake, fix the problems and we will talk together again.

✓ Yes, but not really; because I don't want to break a friendship, when they have a problem we give them advice, my friends fix the mistakes or problems, and then we talk together again.

Avoid double 'will will'; mix of future and present should be consistent. Using present simple (we give, my friends fix) is appropriate for habitual actions. Use 'a friendship' or 'our friendship' for clarity. Remove duplicate words and use parallel verb forms. Suggestion: use present simple for habitual behavior and ensure verbs are not duplicated.