Reading— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Make the response more concise and grammatically correct: begin with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details with smooth linking. Avoid sentence fragments (e.g., "For example.") and incorrect word choices (e.g., "economics works").

예시: Yes, I enjoy reading. I mainly read books about economics and history, and from them I have learned specific ideas such as military strategy and economic theories. For example, a history book I read explained the strategic decisions behind a famous battle, which helped me understand cause and effect.

제안: Polish phrasing and add a linking phrase to make the answer smoother; combine reasons into one coherent sentence and fix small grammar points (use "anytime" correctly and avoid repetition).

예시: I prefer reading on a screen because ebooks let me access more information and interactive features. In addition, I can read on my tablet or smartphone anywhere and at any time, which is very convenient.

제안: Correct grammar and word choice, use linking words, and be specific with examples. Limit to two or three sentences and avoid repetition (e.g., "difficulty difficult", "academics books").

예시: I need to read carefully when studying difficult materials such as academic papers, textbooks, or technical articles because they contain precise information and complex arguments. Conversely, I don't read as carefully when looking at comics or light novels, since I mainly read them for enjoyment.

제안: Make the explanation more natural and specific: replace vague phrases like "others thinking" with "the author's ideas" or "characters' motivations", and use linking words to connect reasons. Keep to three sentences max.

예시: I prefer detailed reading because it lets me fully understand the author's ideas and the characters' motivations. In addition, I find the process enjoyable and, after finishing a book, I often feel a strong sense of achievement.

× I usually read books about economics and history.

✓ I usually read books about economics and history.

No change needed. The present simple 'read' is correct for habitual actions.

× For example.

✓ For example, I learned a lot from them.

The original 'For example.' is a sentence fragment lacking a main clause (sentence without a verb). Combine with the next idea to form a complete sentence. Use 'learned a lot from them' to refer back to books.

× I learned a lot of things like military strategy or economics works from these books.

✓ I learned a lot about military strategy and economic theories from these books.

Use parallel and uncountable/abstract nouns: 'military strategy' and 'economic theories' are natural. 'Economics works' is incorrect; use 'economic theories' or 'works on economics'. Also 'a lot of things' is vague; 'learned a lot about' is clearer.

× I would like to read on a screen.

✓ I prefer to read on a screen.

Context asks preference; 'I would like to' suggests a desire rather than general preference. 'Prefer' fits better. Both are grammatical but 'prefer' matches the question.

× The main reason is that I can get more information from ebooks or digital books.

✓ The main reason is that I can get more information from e-books or digital books.

Use consistent spelling 'e-books' and no article needed. This sentence is otherwise correct.

× Also I can read it anywhere on the tablet or smartphone and anytime.

✓ Also I can read them anywhere on a tablet or smartphone and at any time.

Books/ebooks are plural or uncountable, so use 'them' rather than 'it'. Use 'a tablet or smartphone' (indefinite article) and 'at any time' for correct prepositional phrase.

× I think I should read carefully when I read some difficulty difficult books like academics books or papers and textbook while I shouldn't be carefully when reading comics and novels.

✓ I think I should read carefully when I read difficult academic books, papers, or textbooks, while I do not need to be careful when reading comics and novels.

Multiple issues: 'some difficulty difficult' is redundant — use 'difficult'. 'Academics books' should be 'academic books'. 'Textbook' pluralized to 'textbooks'. Use parallel structure and correct adverb placement: 'be careful' instead of 'be carefully'. 'Shouldn't be carefully' is incorrect adverb/adjective use.

× I prefer detailed reading.

✓ I prefer detailed reading.

No change needed. 'Prefer' with noun phrase 'detailed reading' is correct.

× The main reason is that I can get more information about others thinking and it is enjoyable.

✓ The main reason is that I can learn more about others' thinking, and it is enjoyable.

Use 'learn more about' rather than 'get more information about'. Use the possessive form 'others'' (or 'other people's') to show thinking belongs to others. Add comma before 'and' for clarity.

× Also after reading I can feel a sense of achievement.

✓ Also, after reading I can feel a sense of achievement.

Add a comma after 'Also' for natural punctuation. The sentence is otherwise correct.