Reading— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 답변이 전반적으로 의도는 전달되지만 문법적 오류와 중복 표현이 많습니다. 주제문을 명확히 하고, 관련 세부사항(어떤 종류의 자기계발서, 왜 읽는지)을 구체적으로 제시하세요. 문장은 간결하게 2~3문장 내로 유지하고, 연결어를 사용해 흐름을 자연스럽게 만드세요. 예: 주제문 → 이유/구체적 예 → 결론(희망 사항). 또한 ‘wish I did it more’ 대신 ‘wish I read more’ 같이 자연스러운 표현을 사용하세요.

예시: Yes, I enjoy reading, but I wish I read more often. I usually choose self-help books because they give me practical tips for personal growth, such as time management and goal setting. When I find useful ideas, I try to apply them in my daily life.

제안: 답변 구조가 불분명하고 잡음(음성 기호)과 문법 오류가 있습니다. 먼저 간단한 주제문으로 선호를 밝히고, 이유를 1~2가지 구체적으로 제시하세요. 비교 표현을 쓸 때는 ‘more’ 뒤에 형용사 원형을 사용하세요. 예: ‘easier to understand’ 와 ‘easier to highlight’ 처럼 정확한 구문을 사용하고, 불필요한 말버릇(uh, umm)을 줄이세요.

예시: I prefer reading on paper because it helps me concentrate better and makes it easier to underline or highlight important passages. Although some people say paper is old-fashioned, I find it more comfortable for long reading sessions.

제안: 답변이 미완성이고 반복적입니다. 질문은 두 부분(언제 주의 깊게 읽는지, 언제 그렇지 않은지)을 요구하므로 둘 다 답하세요. 명확한 주제문 후 예시(예: 규칙, 계약서 등)와 반대 상황(예: 소셜 미디어나 잡지의 가벼운 기사)도 제시하세요. 연결어(For example, However)를 사용해 논리적 흐름을 만드세요.

예시: I need to read carefully when the information affects my responsibilities, for example when I read regulations, contracts, or official notices. However, I don’t read as carefully when browsing social media or light magazine articles, because those texts are usually informal and low-risk.

제안: 의미는 전달되지만 어휘 선택과 문장이 부정확합니다(‘retail’ → ‘detailed’). 질문에는 이유와 간단한 예를 덧붙여 2~3문장으로 구성하세요. 연결어로 이유를 명확히 하고, 문장을 완결하세요. 또한 불필요한 말버릇을 줄이세요.

예시: I prefer detailed reading because missing a sentence could lead to misunderstandings or mistakes, especially in work-related documents. For example, when I read instructions or emails, I usually read every line carefully to avoid errors.

× Yes I do enjoy reading but I wish I did it more of it.

✓ Yes, I do enjoy reading, but I wish I did it more often.

The original sentence has redundant and awkward phrasing ('more of it') and missing commas. Replace 'more of it' with 'more often' to express frequency. Add commas after the interjection and before the conjunction to improve sentence structure. Suggestion: Use 'more often' to indicate frequency and add commas: 'Yes, I do enjoy reading, but I wish I did it more often.'

× When I get a chance to read something I usually read a sub about the book about self development or materials that makes me have new.

✓ When I get a chance to read something, I usually read a summary about self-development books or materials that give me new ideas.

Multiple issues: missing comma after dependent clause, incorrect word 'sub' (should be 'summary'), awkward repetition 'about the book about', incorrect noun phrase 'self development' needs a hyphen, and verb agreement 'makes me have new' is ungrammatical. Use 'give me new ideas' to convey meaning. Add comma after the introductory clause for clarity. Suggestion: Use precise nouns ('summary'), hyphenate compound adjectives ('self-development'), and a clear verb phrase ('give me new ideas').

× Uh, I prefer to read on paper is because someone said it is old fashioned style, but I think it reading on paper is umm more easier to understand some words or highlight.

✓ Uh, I prefer to read on paper because some people say it is old-fashioned, and I think reading on paper is easier for understanding words and highlighting.

Problems: unnecessary 'is' after 'paper', incorrect phrase 'old fashioned style' (use 'old-fashioned'), double comparative 'more easier' is incorrect (use 'easier'), and awkward 'to understand some words or highlight' needs parallel structure. Remove superfluous words and correct punctuation. Suggestion: Use 'because' without extra 'is', hyphenate 'old-fashioned', avoid double comparatives, and keep parallel verb forms: 'easier for understanding words and highlighting.'

× 1st when I need to, when I do something correctly or carefully, such as reading a regulation or rules in the public space, I have to read carefully and.

✓ First, when I need to do something correctly or carefully, such as reading regulations or rules in public spaces, I have to read carefully.

Errors: odd numbering '1st' in speech should be 'First,' dangling comma and repeated 'when', awkward phrase 'regulation or rules' (use plural 'regulations or rules'), and dangling sentence ending 'and.' Remove redundancy and fix plurality and punctuation. Suggestion: Use 'First,' to enumerate, avoid repeating conjunctions, use plural nouns for general references, and complete the sentence without trailing 'and.'

× Uh, I prefer to retail reading because sometimes if I miss something important or skip some sentence it cause a problem or misunderstanding. So I usually try to read the.

✓ Uh, I prefer detailed reading because if I miss something important or skip a sentence, it can cause a problem or misunderstanding, so I usually try to read carefully.

Problems: 'retail' is the wrong word; should be 'detailed.' Missing article 'a' before 'sentence', verb agreement 'it cause' should be 'it can cause', and sentence ended abruptly 'read the.' Combine clauses, add commas, and finish with 'read carefully.' Suggestion: Choose the correct adjective ('detailed'), use articles where needed, ensure subject-verb agreement, and complete the sentence with an adverb like 'carefully.'