Keys— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more concise and natural. Start with a direct topic sentence, avoid filler words (uh, um), correct prepositions (use "for"/"to" or omit), and give one or two clear supporting details. Keep it under 5 sentences.

예시: No, I don't carry many keys. I usually take just my house key and my car key because carrying more is awkward and unnecessary.

제안: Provide a clearer, chronological brief story with correct tense and fewer hesitations. Use linking words (for example, "When" and "so") and specific detail (time, consequence). Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

예시: Yes. Once I returned home from work and realized I had lost my house key, so I had to call a locksmith to let me in.

제안: Be precise and use correct adverbs and plurals. Begin with a direct statement, then give a specific condition and consequence. Reduce repetition and filler words.

예시: Not often. However, if I'm in a hurry I sometimes forget my house or room keys, and when that happens I usually need to call a locksmith.

제안: Use natural phrasing and clear reasons. Start with your opinion, then give two concise reasons using linking words like "because" and "so". Replace "dummy key" with "spare key" for correct vocabulary.

예시: Yes, I think it's a good idea to leave a spare key with a neighbour because it prevents being locked out and allows quick access in an emergency.

× I don't usually bring many keys with me as I find it difficult to handle them.

✓ I don't usually carry many keys because I find them difficult to manage.

'bring' is less appropriate when referring to what you normally have on your person; 'carry' fits better. 'as' is acceptable but 'because' is clearer for cause. 'handle them' is grammatically okay but 'manage' is more natural here.

× I usually have keys off my house when I left my house and uh, uh, keys off my car along with me.

✓ I usually have the keys to my house and the keys to my car with me when I leave.

Use 'keys to' not 'keys off'. Also tense should match: use present habit 'when I leave' rather than past 'when I left'. Place articles appropriately: 'the keys to my house' and 'the keys to my car' are natural.

× the one time I remember that I lost the keys was off my house.

✓ The one time I remember losing my house keys was when I returned from work.

Use the gerund 'remember losing' rather than 'remember that I lost' for a more natural expression. Use 'house keys' or 'keys to my house' instead of 'keys was off my house'. Also add 'when I returned from work' to connect events.

× when I reached the house, I uh, saw that I have lost my key.

✓ When I reached the house, I saw that I had lost my key.

Sequence of past events requires past perfect 'had lost' to show the loss happened before the moment 'I saw'. 'Have lost' (present perfect) is incorrect because the context is a past narrative.

× So in that I had to call the locksmith to open the door.

✓ So I had to call a locksmith to open the door.

Omit 'in that' which is awkward; use 'So' or 'So I had to'. Use the indefinite article 'a locksmith' unless referring to a specific one previously mentioned.

× Umm, not often, but when I am in a hurry I sometime forget my keys, sometime off house and some time of my room keys.

✓ Not often, but when I'm in a hurry I sometimes forget my keys: sometimes the house keys and sometimes my room keys.

Use 'sometimes' (not 'sometime') and consistent contraction 'I'm'. Use 'the house keys' or 'my room keys' and proper punctuation to list possibilities.

× Uh yes, in that case I have to call locksmith.

✓ Yes, in that case I have to call a locksmith.

English requires an article before singular countable nouns: 'a locksmith' not 'locksmith'.

× Yes, I think it's good idea to leave the keys with the neighbor as uh, the case of forgetting the keys will be stopped and we can get the keys from neighbor whenever we want.

✓ Yes, I think it's a good idea to leave a key with a neighbor, because it prevents being locked out and we can get the key from the neighbor whenever we need it.

Include articles 'a good idea', 'a key', 'a neighbor'. 'the case of forgetting the keys will be stopped' is awkward; use 'prevents being locked out'. Use singular 'key' if you mean one spare. Use 'whenever we need it' for natural phrasing.

× I prefer to give a dummy key to my neighbor.

✓ I prefer to give a spare key to my neighbor.

'Dummy key' is unusual; 'spare key' is the correct collocation. Keep article 'a' and use 'neighbor' spelling consistently.