Keys— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Make your answer more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons using linking words. Avoid grammar mistakes (use present simple for habits) and redundant phrases.

예시: No, I usually only carry one key. For example, when I go out I just take my house key because carrying many keys feels cumbersome. Besides, if something is locked I can always ask for help, so I prefer to keep things simple.

제안: Answer directly with a clear time frame and give a specific strategy that explains why you haven't lost them. Use correct tense and connect ideas with linking words.

예시: No, I have never lost my keys. I always keep them in a secure pocket inside my bag, so they don't get misplaced. For instance, I attach them to a keyring and store them in a zipped compartment whenever I go out.

제안: Be concise and use natural phrasing. State the habit in present simple and give one clear supporting detail. Avoid hesitation sounds and repetition.

예시: No, I rarely forget my keys. I'm quite careful, so I always put them in the same pocket of my bag before leaving home. Because of that routine, I have never locked myself out.

제안: Give a direct opinion first, then provide specific reasons and one brief example. Use linking words (for example, because, so) and correct phrasing ("in my opinion", "I used to do this").

예시: Yes, I think it's a good idea to leave a spare key with a neighbour because it provides a backup if you lose your keys. For example, I used to give a spare key to a close neighbour, and once when I locked myself out they let me in quickly.

× No, I'm not that kind of a person who's taking keys with everywhere.

✓ No, I'm not the kind of person who takes keys everywhere.

Use 'the kind of person' and relative clause 'who takes' (simple present) to describe habitual action. 'Taking keys with everywhere' is ungrammatical: use 'takes keys everywhere' and omit extra preposition 'with'.

× If I'm going outside, I took my house key, only that one.

✓ If I go out, I take my house key, only that one.

The conditional refers to habitual present action, so use simple present 'If I go out, I take'. 'Took' is past tense and doesn't match the habitual meaning.

× I won't take any other keys.

✓ I don't take any other keys.

Use simple present to state a habit. 'Won't' suggests future refusal; here the speaker describes a general habit, so use 'I don't take'.

× It's a burden for us is that we have to take everywhere and if it's closed, we can't open anything.

✓ It's a burden to have to carry them everywhere, because if something is closed, we can't open it.

Original has redundant 'is' and unclear referents. Restructure: 'a burden to have to carry them everywhere' and 'if something is closed, we can't open it' clarifies meaning and fixes word order.

× So I didn't prefer that.

✓ So I don't prefer that.

The speaker states a general preference in the present, so use present tense 'don't prefer' rather than past 'didn't prefer'.

× No, until today it never happened to me.

✓ No, that has never happened to me until today.

Use present perfect 'has never happened' for life experience up to now. 'Until today' suggests present perfect is appropriate rather than simple past.

× But for my friends and in my family members, they lost the keys many times.

✓ But my friends and other family members have lost their keys many times.

Remove 'for' and 'in' which are incorrect here; use 'have lost' (present perfect) for repeated past events affecting present, and use 'their' to match plural subjects.

× Whenever I go outside. I kept my keys in a safe place like inside my bag, so I never lost it.

✓ Whenever I go out, I keep my keys in a safe place, like inside my bag, so I never lose them.

Combine fragments into one sentence. Use present tense 'go out' and 'keep' for habitual actions, and 'lose them' (plural) to agree with 'keys'. },{