Food— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Cải thiện cấu trúc câu và loại bỏ tiếng lòng vòng (umm, because). Trả lời trực tiếp bằng một câu chủ đề ngắn gọn, sau đó đưa một hoặc hai chi tiết cụ thể (ví dụ: tần suất, hoàn cảnh, lý do rõ ràng). Tránh lặp từ như “the eat it” và sửa ngữ pháp (e.g., “I like them since I was a child” → “I have liked them since I was a child”).

예시: My favourite food is fast food, especially French fries and hamburgers. I have liked them since childhood because they are quick and tasty, so I often eat them after exams or when I don’t have time to cook.

제안: Sử dụng thì quá khứ nhất quán và tránh tiếng luyến (umm, MMM). Trả lời bằng câu chủ đề ở thì quá khứ (e.g., “I liked chocolate”). Thêm một hoặc hai chi tiết cụ thể (ví dụ: loại chocolate, tần suất, lý do rõ ràng).

예시: When I was young, I liked chocolate a lot, especially milk chocolate bars. I ate it almost every day because sweets would cheer me up after school.

제안: Trả lời rõ ràng hơn, dùng liên từ để nối ý và sửa phát âm/viết tên lễ hội cho chính xác. Bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề ngắn gọn, rồi nêu ví dụ cụ thể cho mùa hoặc dịp lễ (tên món ăn, khi nào ăn, ý nghĩa).

예시: Yes. On normal days I usually eat rice, but at special occasions such as Tet holiday my family often eats bánh chưng or bánh tét. These traditional dishes are only prepared for celebrations.

제안: Tránh ngập ngừng và dùng thì đúng: trả lời trực tiếp (No, it hasn’t changed). Giải thích ngắn gọn với lý do và ví dụ cụ thể (ví dụ: món ăn cụ thể, khi ăn). Giữ không quá 3 câu để tránh lan man.

예시: No, it hasn’t changed. I still enjoy chicken and French fries because they remind me of my childhood meals, and I often order them when I eat out with friends.

× My favorite food is fast food, especially French fries and hamburger because I like them since I was a child or when I want a quick and tasty treat and I usually eat the eat it when I finish my exam.

✓ My favorite food is fast food, especially French fries and hamburgers, because I have liked them since I was a child or when I want a quick and tasty treat, and I usually eat them when I finish my exams.

The sentence has several article and noun number issues: 'hamburger' should be plural 'hamburgers' to match 'French fries' and the general plural sense; 'the eat it' is an error and should be 'them' to refer to plural foods. Also use 'have liked' (present perfect) with 'since I was a child' to show continuity from past to present, and 'exams' plural is more natural if referring to multiple tests. Suggestion: use plural nouns for general statements, replace incorrect words with appropriate pronouns, and use present perfect with 'since'. Grammar problem type ID:22

× When I was young, I really prefer chocolate.

✓ When I was young, I really preferred chocolate.

The sentence mixes past time marker 'When I was young' with present simple 'prefer'. Use past tense 'preferred' to match the time frame. Suggestion: align verb tense with time expressions (use past tense for past time references). Grammar problem type ID:5

× MMM because I really like, umm, sweetie food and I think sweetie can boost my mood.

✓ Mm, because I really like sweet foods, and I think sweets can boost my mood.

'Sweetie food' is incorrect collocation. Use the noun 'sweets' or 'sweet foods'. Also use 'can' correctly with plural noun 'sweets'. Suggestion: use correct noun forms and collocations: 'sweet foods' or 'sweets'. Grammar problem type ID:13

× In normal day I usually eat rice umm, but and uh, special day like uh Ted Holiday.

✓ On a normal day I usually eat rice, but on special days like Tet holiday...

Use the preposition 'on' with time expressions 'on a normal day' and 'on special days'. 'Ted' is likely 'Tet' and 'holiday' may not need capitalization mid-sentence. Also plural 'days' fits general habit. Suggestion: use correct articles and prepositions for time phrases and correct proper noun spelling. Grammar problem type ID:22

× My family uh, often eat bangchun or bangsae.

✓ My family often eats bangchun or bangsae.

Subject-verb agreement: 'family' is a singular collective noun and takes singular verb 'eats' in American English. Also remove filler 'uh'. Suggestion: use singular verb with singular collective nouns or make 'family members' if plural intended. Grammar problem type ID:11

× Umm, I think no, because when I was child I really like it, uh, chicken and French fry.

✓ Um, I don't think so, because when I was a child I really liked chicken and French fries.

'I think no' is ungrammatical—use 'I don't think so'. 'When I was a child' requires past tense 'liked'. Use plural 'French fries' for general food. Suggestion: use proper negative form and past tense to match time reference and plural nouns for general items. Grammar problem type ID:5

× And nowadays I assume that MMM, because as my, uh, childhood food.

✓ Nowadays I suppose my favorite food is the same because it dates back to my childhood.

Original sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'I assume that because as my childhood food' is ungrammatical. Recast to a coherent statement linking present preference to childhood: 'my favorite food is the same because it dates back to my childhood.' Suggestion: combine clauses properly and use clear connectors. Grammar problem type ID:26