Food— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 答えは伝わりますが、冗長で文法や語彙の使い方に改善の余地があります。まずトピック文を明確にしてから、理由を2つ程度に絞り、接続語（because, and, also, moreover等）を使って流れを良くしましょう。また、単語の繰り返し（meatが多い）を避け、具体的な語彙（e.g. rich tomato flavour, savory sauce）を使うと自然に聞こえます。発音や文法では過去形・現在形の一致と冠詞の使用（a/the）にも注意してください。

예시: My favourite food is spaghetti Bolognese. I enjoy it because the rich tomato flavour and savory meat sauce are very satisfying, and the texture of the pasta complements the sauce well.

제안: 意味は分かりますが、時制の一致や単語の誤り（laming→ramen）を直す必要があります。まず過去の嗜好を述べるので過去形を使い、理由を補足する際にはbecauseの後に簡潔な説明を続けましょう。また固有名詞や職業を説明するときは冠詞や所有格に注意してください。具体例を入れるとより説得力が出ます。

예시: When I was young, I liked ramen because my grandfather made it as his job. I often ate it with my family, and I remember we would have it together every weekend.

제안: 答えは明確ですが、表現が不自然で語彙選択に誤りがあります（no cold lemonは意味が不明）。季節ごとの具体的な料理名や理由を簡潔に述べ、接続語を使って対比を明確にしましょう。例：In summer I prefer light, cold dishes because... In winter I enjoy warming meals because... といった構成がおすすめです。

예시: Yes. In summer I often eat cold ramen or light salads because they feel refreshing in the heat, whereas in winter I prefer hot pot because it is warming and perfect for sharing with family.

제안: 回答は混乱しており、内容が曖昧で文法的に誤りが多いです。まず質問に直接答える簡潔な一文（Yes/No）を示し、その後で変化があれば具体的に説明しましょう。言いたいことが複数ある場合は順序立てて述べ、語彙の誤り（lemon? shoirame?）を明確にし、文を完結させてください。理由を述べるときはbecause以下を必ず完結させます。

예시: No, my favourite food has not changed, but my preferred type of ramen has. As a child I liked simple soy-based ramen, whereas now I prefer rich tonkotsu ramen because I enjoy the creamy pork broth and deeper flavours.

× I like spaghetti with meat sauce because I like meat and tomato and meat sauce has meat so I love it.

✓ I like spaghetti with meat sauce because I like meat and tomatoes, and meat sauce contains meat, so I love it.

The sentence needs the plural form 'tomatoes' when referring to the vegetable in general and 'contains' is more natural than 'has' for describing ingredients. Also adding commas and 'and' improves sentence clarity. Use plural for countable nouns when speaking generally.

× I like laming because my grandfather's job was making ramen and when I was young I always ate ramen with my family.

✓ I liked ramen because my grandfather's job was making ramen, and when I was young I always ate ramen with my family.

The question asked about past preferences ('when you were young'), so the past tense 'liked' should be used instead of 'like'. Also 'laming' appears to be a typo for 'ramen'. Maintain consistent past tense for habitual past actions.

× Yes I do. In summer I often eat cool ramen, no cold lemon. But in winter I often eat hot pot.

✓ Yes, I do. In summer I often eat cold ramen, not hot ramen. But in winter I often eat hot pot.

'Cool' is less natural than 'cold' for food temperature. 'No cold lemon' is unclear and likely incorrect; changed to 'not hot ramen' to contrast temperatures. Added commas for clarity and corrected phrasing to clearly contrast summer and winter choices.

× No it hasn't. I like lemon now too, but when I was young I like shoirame but now I like tonkotsu ramen because it's.

✓ No, it hasn't. I like lemon now too, but when I was young I liked shio ramen; now I like tonkotsu ramen.

The first clause correctly uses present perfect negative 'hasn't', but the following clause refers to past preference and should use 'liked', not 'like'. 'Shoirame' appears to be a misspelling of 'shio ramen'. The sentence ended abruptly with 'because it's.' which is incomplete, so that part was removed to form a complete sentence. Commas and semicolons improve clarity.