Building— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Cevap doğrudur ancak daha doğal ve akıcı hale getirilebilir. Kısa ve net bir konu cümlesi verip ardından konumu ve çevrenin neden böyle olduğuna dair bir veya iki destekleyici cümle ekleyin. Bağlaç kullanarak (for example, because, so) mantıksal bağlantı kurun ve tekrarları azaltın.

예시: No, there aren't any tall buildings near my home. Our neighborhood mostly has low-rise houses and small apartment blocks, so the skyline looks quite open. For example, the tallest building nearby is only three storeys high.

제안: Cevapta tekrar ve dilbilgisi hatası var. Daha doğal cevap için bir konu cümlesi ile başlayıp fotoğraf çekme sıklığını, nedenlerini ve bir örnekle destekleyin. Bağlaçlar (because, especially, when) kullanarak cümleleri bağlayın ve fiil çekimine dikkat edin.

예시: Yes, I often take photos of buildings because I enjoy architectural details. I especially like capturing doors and facades when the light is good, for example, during the golden hour in the evening.

제안: Cevap kısa ve kapanış hissi veriyor; konuşmayı genişletmek için neden ziyaret etmek istemediğinizi veya ilginizi çeken türde bir bina olmadığını açıklayın. Alternatif olarak, ilginizi çekebilecek bir bina türü hakkında konuşun. Bağlaçlarla (however, instead, because) mantığı destekleyin.

예시: Not really — there isn't a particular building I want to visit at the moment because I'm more interested in natural landscapes. However, I would be curious to see an old historic cathedral someday to appreciate its architecture.

제안: İfade açık ama dilbilgisi ve akıcılık eksik. Tercihinizi kısa bir konu cümlesiyle belirtin, sonra nedenlerini iki destekleyici fikirle açıklayın ve bağlaçlarla bağlayın. 'I don't want' yerine 'I wouldn't like to' veya 'I don't want to live in one' gibi tam cümle kullanın.

예시: No, I wouldn't like to live in a tall building. I prefer a small house because it's quieter and feels more personal, and I also like having a garden which is rare in high-rise apartments.

× No, there are no tall buildings near our home.

✓ No, there aren't any tall buildings near our home.

Use 'there be' negative form with 'there aren't any' instead of 'there are no' for more natural spoken English; also contraction 'aren't' fits conversational reply. Suggestion: say 'There aren't any tall buildings near our home.' or 'There are no tall buildings near my home.'

× Yes, I take photos of buildings. Sometimes I like take photos of buildings.

✓ Yes, I take photos of buildings. Sometimes I like taking photos of buildings.

After the verb 'like' when meaning 'enjoy', use the gerund (verb + -ing). Use 'like taking' not 'like take'. Suggestion: use 'I like taking photos' for correct structure.

× No, there is not a building I would like to visit.

✓ No, there isn't a building I would like to visit.

Use the negative form of 'there is' as 'there isn't' (contraction) in spoken English; also 'there is not' is grammatically possible but less natural. Alternatively 'There isn't any building I would like to visit.' would also be correct.

× No, I don't want. I like small house.

✓ No, I don't want to. I like a small house.

1) 'I don't want' needs an infinitive if followed by another verb or to complete thought; here 'I don't want to' is more natural. 2) Countable singular noun 'house' requires an article 'a'. So use 'a small house'. Suggestion: 'No, I don't want to. I like a small house.' or better 'No, I don't want to live in one. I prefer a small house.'