Travelling— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
Do you look out the window at the scenery when travelling by bus or car?
수험생
Yes, I usually look out the window at the landscape when traveling by bus because when I look out I can feel relaxed and it can help me reduce headache.
시험관
Do you take photos of the scenery outside the car window?
수험생
Yes, I usually take photos of the scenery outside, especially if it is my hobbies when I travel because. It can help me remember moments.
시험관
Do you prefer the mountains or the sea?
수험생
I prefer the mountains than the sea because they are have many species, cute and the atmosphere is clearly.
평가
총점
Part 1
Do you look out the window at the scenery when travelling by bus or car?
점수: 72.0제안: Câu trả lời đã trả lời trực tiếp nhưng cần rút gọn, dùng cấu trúc câu tự nhiên hơn, và bổ sung liên từ hợp lý. Tránh lặp ý (relaxed và reduce headache là hai ý có thể kết nối). Thêm chi tiết cụ thể về cảm giác hoặc ví dụ ngắn để làm câu trả lời thuyết phục hơn.
예시: Yes, I usually look out of the window when travelling by bus. It helps me relax and often eases my headaches, especially on long trips. For example, looking at green fields or passing towns calms me and makes the journey more enjoyable.
Do you take photos of the scenery outside the car window?
점수: 60.0제안: Câu trả lời hiện tại có lỗi ngữ pháp và cấu trúc lủng củng ("if it is my hobbies"; câu bị cắt). Cần trả lời rõ ràng, sửa ngữ pháp, dùng liên từ phù hợp và cung cấp ví dụ cụ thể (loại cảnh hay lúc nào bạn chụp). Giữ câu ngắn gọn tối đa 3–4 câu.
예시: Yes, I often take photos of the scenery from the car window, especially when I see interesting landscapes. For example, I like to capture sunrise over farmland or colourful villages so I can remember the trip later.
Do you prefer the mountains or the sea?
점수: 50.0제안: Câu trả lời chứa lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng sai (sử dụng "prefer... than", "are have", "cute" và "the atmosphere is clearly"). Cần sửa cấu trúc: dùng "prefer X to Y", mô tả rõ lý do với từ vựng phù hợp và ví dụ ngắn. Thêm liên từ để câu mạch lạc.
예시: I prefer the mountains to the sea because they are richer in wildlife and feel more peaceful. For instance, I enjoy hiking and hearing birds and streams, which makes the atmosphere calm and refreshing.
문법
× Yes, I usually look out the window at the landscape when traveling by bus because when I look out I can feel relaxed and it can help me reduce headache.
✓ Yes, I usually look out the window at the landscape when traveling by bus because when I look out I feel relaxed and it helps me reduce my headache.
The sentence mixes modal 'can' with habitual present meaning; use simple present 'feel' and 'helps' for habitual actions. Also add the possessive 'my' before 'headache' for specificity. Suggestion: use simple present for routines and include appropriate possessive pronouns.
× Yes, I usually take photos of the scenery outside, especially if it is my hobbies when I travel because. It can help me remember moments.
✓ Yes, I usually take photos of the scenery outside, especially since it is one of my hobbies when I travel because it helps me remember moments.
The phrase 'it is my hobbies' mixes singular 'it' with plural 'hobbies' and is ungrammatical. Use 'one of my hobbies' or 'a hobby of mine'. Also combine the sentence fragments and use simple present 'helps' for habitual action.
× I prefer the mountains than the sea because they are have many species, cute and the atmosphere is clearly.
✓ I prefer the mountains to the sea because they have many species, are cute, and the atmosphere is clear.
Wrong comparative preposition 'than' with 'prefer' should be 'to'. 'They are have' incorrectly combines 'are' and 'have'—use 'have'. 'Cute' needs linking verb 'are' for plural subject. 'Clearly' is an adverb; use adjective 'clear' to describe 'atmosphere'. Also reorder adjectives and verbs to form correct clauses.
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