Typing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Improve grammatical accuracy and fluency: correct small errors and finish sentences. Make answer succinct (max 4 sentences) and give one clear specific example. Use linking phrase to connect reason and example.

예시: I prefer typing because it is more convenient and saves time compared with handwriting. For example, I type emails and take notes on my laptop every day, which helps me organize information quickly. As a result, I can respond faster and keep digital copies for later reference.

제안: Reduce repetition and improve sentence structure: start with a clear topic sentence, then give two concise supporting details using linking words like 'because' or 'so'. Avoid filler phrases.

예시: I usually type on a laptop because it is portable and convenient. For example, I can put it in my bag and practice typing while travelling, and it’s also powerful enough for my daily tasks like writing essays and emailing.

제안: Correct tense and vocabulary, and avoid awkward phrasing: give clear timeline and specific activities that show progress. Use linking words like 'then' or 'by the time'. Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

예시: I started learning the basics of typing in seventh grade, when my teacher showed us the keyboard layout. By tenth grade I became familiar with touch-typing after practising regularly and using online drills to improve speed and accuracy.

제안: Use parallel structure and correct grammar: list methods concisely with linking words and give a specific example of a resource and a measurable result (speed or accuracy).

예시: I improve my typing by watching tutorial videos and taking practice tests on online platforms, which provide instant feedback. For example, I use typing.com regularly and it helped me raise my speed from 35 to 55 words per minute while reducing errors.

× Well, I prefer typing because it is more convenient as well as the time saving than handwriting.

✓ Well, I prefer typing because it is more convenient and more time-saving than handwriting.

The phrase 'time saving' is used incorrectly as a noun phrase; it should be an adjective 'time-saving' to modify 'than handwriting'. Also 'as well as' is not correct when comparing two things with 'more'; use 'and' or 'more...than'. Suggestion: use parallel comparative structure 'more convenient and more time-saving than handwriting.'

× For example, I type in my daily life such as the e-mail, note taking and messages.

✓ For example, I type in my daily life, such as emails, notes and messages.

The original sentence has awkward structure and incorrect noun forms. 'the e-mail' should be plural 'emails' for general habits, 'note taking' should be 'notes' or 'note-taking' as a noun. Remove unnecessary article 'the'. Suggestion: use parallel noun list and pluralize general items.

× It very.

✓ It is very convenient.

The fragment 'It very.' lacks a verb and an adjective to complete the idea. Add the verb 'is' and an adjective like 'convenient' to form a complete sentence. Suggestion: always include a main verb and complement.

× Well I well I use the laptop in my daily life.

✓ Well, I use a laptop in my daily life.

Duplicate 'well I' is a repetition error and 'the laptop' implies a specific device; use the indefinite article 'a laptop' for general habit. Also add comma after introductory 'Well'. Suggestion: avoid repetition and use appropriate article for general statements.

× I practice my typing on it and it is very easy to carry and I can easily put it in my bag and while travelling I can practice on it.

✓ I practice typing on it; it is very easy to carry, so I can put it in my bag and practise while travelling.

Use consistent present simple tense for habitual actions ('practice typing'). Remove redundant 'my' before 'typing'. Use conjunction 'so' to show result rather than repeating 'and'. 'Practise' vs 'practice' spelling depends on variety; keep consistent. Suggestion: keep verbs parallel and avoid redundancy.

× I remember when I was a 7th grade on that time I learned about the basic thing about a keyboard.

✓ I remember when I was in seventh grade; at that time I learned the basic things about a keyboard.

Use 'in seventh grade' (correct preposition and ordinal form). 'On that time' is incorrect; use 'at that time'. 'learned the basic things' or 'learned the basics' is better than 'learned about the basic thing'. Suggestion: use proper prepositions for time and pluralize 'things' or use 'basics'.

× But when I and when I in a 10 standard, that time I completely familiar with the keyboard and I learn about the insurance and outs of it.

✓ But when I was in 10th standard, I became completely familiar with the keyboard and learned about the ins and outs of it.

The original has repetition 'when I and when I' and missing verb 'was'. Use '10th standard' or better 'tenth grade' with ordinal number. 'Completely familiar' needs a verb like 'became' or 'was'. 'learn' should be past 'learned'. 'insurance and outs' is incorrect phrase; correct idiom is 'ins and outs'. Suggestion: remove repetition, use correct verbs and idioms, and maintain past tense for past events.

× Well, I do several things for improving my typing skill such as watching a tutorial as well as take a practice test on online platform which give me a instant feedback about the speed and accuracy.

✓ Well, I do several things to improve my typing skills, such as watching tutorials and taking practice tests on online platforms which give me instant feedback about speed and accuracy.

After 'do things' use 'to + verb' (to improve) rather than 'for improving'. Use plural forms 'skills', 'tutorials', 'tests', 'platforms' for general statements. Use parallel gerunds 'watching' and 'taking'. 'a instant' should be 'instant' or 'an instant' but better 'instant feedback'. 'which give' must agree with plural 'platforms' so 'which give'. Suggestion: use 'to improve', ensure parallel gerunds, pluralize general nouns, and correct article usage.