Typing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be careful with grammar and tense consistency, avoid redundancy, and make sentences more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons using linking words. Correct small errors (e.g., "allowed" → "allows", "there are no other choice" → "there is no other choice").

예시: I prefer typing on a computer because it allows me to work faster and easily rearrange or delete text. For example, when drafting reports at work I can quickly reorganize paragraphs, which saves me time compared with handwriting.

제안: Reduce hesitations and filler words, and use a concise structure: topic sentence + supporting detail. Maintain consistent tense and avoid repetition. Use linking words like "especially" or "because" to connect ideas and give a specific example of when you use the laptop.

예시: Yes, I use a laptop almost every day, especially for work. For instance, I write emails and prepare presentations during office hours, and I usually browse the Internet or stream videos in the evening.

제안: Give a clear, direct answer first, then add a concise supporting detail. Fix grammar and remove hesitations (e.g., "it's would be some sometimes be around" → "it was around"). Be specific if possible (e.g., mention a school year or age).

예시: I learned to type on a keyboard around high school when our computer teacher showed us the basics. At the time, we practiced typing exercises in class to improve our speed and accuracy.

제안: Give a focused answer with one or two specific methods and a linking phrase. Avoid colloquial fillers and correct expressions ("practice makes perfect"). Mention concrete practice techniques or tools to be more informative.

예시: I improve my typing mainly through regular practice. For example, I use online typing exercises for 15 minutes daily and focus on accuracy before speed, which has noticeably improved my typing over time.

× I prefer typing on a computer because it allowed me to complete my talk faster and also it's easy to rearrange or delete text on computers.

✓ I prefer typing on a computer because it allows me to complete my tasks faster and it's easy to rearrange or delete text on a computer.

The student used past tense 'allowed' but the preference is general present, so present simple 'allows' is correct. Also 'talk' is likely intended as 'tasks' or 'work'; 'computers' is better as singular 'a computer' to match 'typing on a computer'. Use consistent present simple for general statements.

× However, I don't mind to use handwriting sometimes if there are no other choice.

✓ However, I don't mind using handwriting sometimes if there is no other choice.

After 'don't mind' the gerund form 'using' is required, not the infinitive 'to use' (Verb + -ing form). Also 'no other choice' needs the singular verb 'is' and ideally the article 'no other choice' is fine; ensure subject-verb agreement 'there is' for singular 'choice'.

× Oh, yes, I used, I would say I'll use laptop almost every day, especially at work.

✓ Oh, yes, I use a laptop almost every day, especially at work.

The original mixes tenses and extraneous words ('used, I would say I'll use'). For habitual action, present simple 'use' is correct and include the article 'a' before 'laptop' (article errors). Remove unnecessary modal constructions.

× And also, uh, uh, during my free time, I usually I like to surf on the Internet.

✓ During my free time, I usually like to surf the Internet.

The sentence has repetition ('usually I like') and filler sounds; simplify to 'I usually like to surf the Internet' or 'I usually surf the Internet'. Also use 'surf the Internet' rather than 'on the Internet' for natural phrasing (preposition choice).

× So I would say yes, I choose it every day almost.

✓ So I would say yes, I use it almost every day.

'Choose' is inappropriate for habitual use here; 'use' in present simple fits. Also place 'almost' before 'every day' for natural adverb placement.

× I cannot remember the exact year, but I think it's would be some sometimes be around when I was in high school when my computer teachers taught us how to use a computer.

✓ I cannot remember the exact year, but I think it was sometime around when I was in high school, when my computer teachers taught us how to use a computer.

The phrase 'it's would be some sometimes be around' mixes tenses and incorrect modal use. For past events, simple past 'it was sometime around...' is correct. Use 'sometime' (not 'some sometimes') and keep consistent past tense for the teaching event.

× the good way to improve my typing is to it's through practice.

✓ A good way to improve my typing is through practice.

Remove the incorrect infinitive 'to it's' and the redundant 'it's'; use 'A good way... is through practice.' Also 'A' article provides correct noun phrase.

× You know, it's like practice make perfect.

✓ You know, it's like 'practice makes perfect.'

The proverb requires third person singular 'makes' after singular noun 'practice' (third person singular issue). Quoting the fixed phrase clarifies correct verb agreement.

× So the more you work on your laptop, the better you are.

✓ So the more you work on your laptop, the better you become.

'The better you are' is grammatically acceptable but 'become' more clearly expresses improvement over time; maintain present simple for general truth. Alternatively 'the better you will become' could be future-focused, but present simple 'become' suits general sayings.