Typing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Make the response more natural and concise. Start with a direct topic sentence, then add one specific reason and a brief supporting detail. Correct small grammar issues (e.g., “I feel comfortable” not “I feel myself comfortable”). Avoid redundancy.

예시: I prefer handwriting. I find it more comfortable and it helps me remember information better because physically writing engages my memory — for example, I remember lecture notes more clearly when I handwrite them.

제안: Give a clear, direct answer and use simpler grammar. Remove filler phrases like “actually to be frank.” If you need to mention a preference, state it succinctly and give one brief reason using a linking word (e.g., “because”).

예시: I don’t use a desktop or laptop keyboard every day. When I do type, I prefer a desktop because the larger screen and full-size keyboard make typing easier and more comfortable.

제안: Open with a clear time reference, then give a specific context and a brief detail. Correct word choices (e.g., “homework” singular/unambiguous) and use a linking phrase like “when” or “during.”

예시: I learned to type at school when I was about 10 years old. We used an online program called Mars Algorithmics, and doing the homework exercises helped me improve my keyboard skills.

제안: Be more concise and specific: name one or two practical methods and give a brief example. Use correct collocation (e.g., “a substantial number of sites” or “many sites”) and a linking word like “for example” to add clarity.

예시: I improve my typing by practicing on online typing websites to increase speed and accuracy. For example, I use typing tests and drills on sites like TypingClub and practice 15 minutes a day to build consistency.

× I opted for handwriting because while I'm writing, I feel myself comfortable and I remember all the things I wrote.

✓ I opted for handwriting because while I'm writing, I feel comfortable and I remember everything I write.

The reflexive 'myself' is unnecessary here; use 'feel comfortable'. Also verb tense consistency: 'while I'm writing' (present continuous) should pair with 'I remember everything I write' (present simple) for habitual/ongoing action. Replace 'all the things' with the more natural 'everything'.

× Actually to be frank, I'm not using a desktop or laptop keyboard every day, but while I was using them I I'm facing towards to desktop it is much more easier.

✓ Actually, to be frank, I don't use a desktop or laptop keyboard every day, but when I do use them I sit facing the desktop because it is much easier.

Use simple present 'I don't use' for habitual actions rather than 'I'm not using'. Remove awkward phrase 'while I was using them' and correct pronoun/word order. 'I'm facing towards to desktop' is ungrammatical: use 'I sit facing the desktop'. 'Much more easier' is incorrect; use 'much easier' or 'far easier'. Also fix punctuation and redundancy ('to be frank' set off by commas).

× In the school we had the site named Mars Algorithmics and while doing the homeworks we learned how to type.

✓ At school we had a site called Mars Algorithmics, and while doing the homework we learned how to type.

Use 'At school' not 'In the school' for general education context. 'A site called' is more natural than 'the site named'. 'Homeworks' is incorrect plural; 'homework' is uncountable. Maintain past tense 'learned' is correct. Also add a comma before 'and'.

× There are substantial amount of sites that can help us to improve our typing speed and accuracy, so the best way is to practice again and again.

✓ There are a substantial number of sites that can help us improve our typing speed and accuracy, so the best way is to practice again and again.

Use 'a substantial number of' or 'a substantial amount of' with uncountable nouns. 'Sites' is countable, so 'a substantial number of' is correct. Also remove unnecessary 'to' after 'help us' ('help us improve' not 'help us to improve').