Typing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Begin with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition, correct grammatical mistakes, and add a brief reason with a linking word. Keep it within 2–3 sentences. For example, say you prefer handwriting and give one clear reason (legibility, personal satisfaction, or better memory) rather than repeating the preference.

예시: I prefer handwriting to typing because my handwriting is neat and I find it more personal. Moreover, I remember information better when I write it by hand, so I often choose handwriting for notes.

제안: Start with a direct, concise statement (e.g., 'I type on a laptop every day'), then give one specific supporting detail using linking words like 'because' or 'because of' to explain why. Avoid contradictory or unclear phrasing such as 'I type without laptop'.

예시: I type on a laptop every day because my workplace provides laptops for all employees. For example, only my manager uses a desktop, so I mainly use a laptop for emails and documents.

제안: Give a direct answer with a clear time reference, then add one or two specific details. Use linking words like 'because' or 'so' correctly and avoid repetition. Keep it concise (2–3 sentences) and maintain natural phrasing.

예시: I learned to type when I was about six years old because my parents bought a desktop and hired a computer tutor. He came to our house and showed me the correct finger positions, which helped me become comfortable with the keyboard.

제안: Provide a clear method and specific examples of how you practise. Start with a concise topic sentence (e.g., 'I improve my typing by using practice apps'), then explain one or two features of the app (timed drills, games, accuracy feedback) using linking words. Avoid vague phrases and filler words.

예시: I improve my typing by using practice applications that include short timed exercises and games. For instance, the app shows the correct finger positions, gives instant feedback on accuracy, and tracks my speed so I can measure progress.

× Yes, I prefer handwriting than typing.

✓ Yes, I prefer handwriting to typing.

The verb 'prefer' is followed by 'to' when comparing two things (prefer A to B). Using 'than' is incorrect in this structure. Use 'prefer X to Y' or 'prefer X rather than Y' (the latter is less common with 'prefer').

× I type without laptop because actually I don't have desktop anymore.

✓ I don't type on a desktop because I don't have one anymore.

The original uses incorrect prepositions and omits articles. Use 'type on' for devices with keyboards. Also include the article 'a' before singular countable nouns ('a desktop'). Rephrasing to 'I don't type on a desktop because I don't have one anymore' is natural and clear.

× Even at my work only my manager has a desktop.

✓ Even at my workplace, only my manager has a desktop.

'My work' is acceptable in casual speech but 'my workplace' is more natural here. Also add a comma after the introductory phrase. The original structure is understandable but using 'workplace' corrects word choice and improves clarity.

× Yes, I would say I type on laptop.

✓ Yes, I would say I type on a laptop.

Countable singular nouns require an article ('a' or 'the'). 'Laptop' needs 'a' here: 'on a laptop.'

× I think I learned how to type on a keyboard when I was six years old, because at that time my parents bought me a desktop in my room and then they actually hired a computer teacher for me.

✓ I think I learned how to type on a keyboard when I was six years old, because my parents bought me a desktop for my room and then they hired a computer teacher for me.

Tense usage is generally correct (past events), but 'bought me a desktop in my room' is awkward; use 'for my room.' 'Actually' is unnecessary and can be removed for formality. Keep past simple consistently: 'bought' and 'hired.'

× So he came to the house and he taught me how to type on a keyboard.

✓ So he came to our house and taught me how to type on a keyboard.

Redundant pronoun 'he' after conjunction is unnecessary; combine actions with past simple verbs. Use 'our house' for natural reference to the family home.

× Actually I used the application, so it's kind of you can make the improving how to type.

✓ Actually I used an application; it helps you improve your typing.

The original mixes tenses and uses incorrect forms ('make the improving how to type'). Use 'helps you improve your typing' (verb + base form after 'help') and include the article 'an' before 'application.'

× They take a short game and then they are showing where is the correct umm, I don't know.

✓ It has short games that show you the correct keys to press.

The original is ungrammatical and unclear. 'They take a short game' is incorrect. Use a clear subject ('it' or 'the app') and present simple for general description: 'has short games that show you the correct keys to press.' Avoid fillers like 'umm, I don't know' in formal responses.