Typing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more grammatical, concise and use linking words. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give two specific reasons with linking words and a short comparative conclusion. Avoid filler sounds and correct articles and verb forms (e.g., “it’s convenient”, “more accurate results”).

예시: I usually prefer typing in most situations. For example, when I write emails or reports for university, I type because it’s faster and more accurate, and it’s easier to edit. However, I prefer handwriting for personal items such as signing cards or jotting quick reminders because handwriting feels more personal and unique.

제안: Provide a clear topic sentence and then expand with specific details and a linking word. Correct grammar (e.g., “gives” not “give”), avoid hesitations, and be precise about frequency and reasons.

예시: Yes, I type on my laptop every day. It gives me a sense of precision and helps me take clear lecture notes quickly. Because the lecturer speaks fast, typing is more efficient than handwriting, so I rarely write by hand during classes.

제안: Give a direct time reference and a simple coherent story. Remove unclear idioms and fix grammar. Use linking words to show sequence (e.g., “when”, “after that”) and provide one clear result (e.g., learned from sister).

예시: I learned to type when I was a child. The first time I used my sister’s computer, she taught me basic keys and later helped me practice for a school computer test, which improved my typing skills.

제안: Give a clear method and explain how it helps using linking words. Correct word choice and tense (e.g., “improve my typing fluency”, “online video games require short fast messages”). Avoid filler words and be specific about practice frequency or other methods.

예시: I’ve improved my typing mainly by playing online video games. Because games often require quick chat messages, I had to type fast under pressure, which increased my speed and accuracy. In addition, I practiced with online typing exercises for ten minutes a day to further improve my fluency.

× It depends on different situation.

✓ It depends on the situation.

The original sentence uses 'different situation' without an article; 'situation' here needs the definite article 'the' to refer to context in general. Use 'the situation' or 'different situations'. Suggestion: 'It depends on the situation' or 'It depends on different situations.'

× For writing emails or report for my final semester, I prefer UH typing because it convenient, faster and more accurate result.

✓ For writing emails or reports for my final semester, I prefer typing because it is convenient, faster, and more accurate.

Multiple issues: 'report' should be plural 'reports' to match 'emails' (parallel nouns). 'UH' removed as filler. Missing verb 'is' before 'convenient' (sentence needs 'it is convenient'). 'result' is unnecessary and uncountable here; use adjective 'accurate' to describe typing. Also add commas in a list. Suggestion: 'For writing emails or reports for my final semester, I prefer typing because it is convenient, faster, and more accurate.'

× However, when I choose handwriting because it requires uh my personal mark for example like signature.

✓ However, I choose handwriting because it allows my personal mark, for example a signature.

The original mixes subordinating conjunctions incorrectly and lacks clear structure. 'When I choose' is unnecessary; use simple present 'I choose'. 'Requires my personal mark' is awkward — 'allows my personal mark' or 'lets me put my personal mark' is better. 'For example like signature' is redundant; use 'for example, a signature.' Suggestion: 'However, I choose handwriting because it allows my personal mark, for example a signature.'

× Typing on my laptop give me a sense of precision, which is essential for taking lecture notes.

✓ Typing on my laptop gives me a sense of precision, which is essential for taking lecture notes.

Subject 'Typing' is a singular gerund, so the verb must be third person singular 'gives' not 'give'. Ensure subject-verb agreement: 'Typing ... gives.'

× Umm, I rarely do handwriting because it is quite, uh, inconvenient while my lecture presents his ideas.

✓ Um, I rarely handwrite because it is quite inconvenient when my lecturer presents his ideas.

'Do handwriting' is unnatural; use the verb 'handwrite' or the noun phrase 'write by hand.' 'While my lecture presents' is incorrect: 'lecture' is an event; the speaker intended 'lecturer' (the person). Use 'when' instead of 'while' for timing here. Remove filler 'uh' and the extra comma. Suggestion: 'Um, I rarely handwrite because it is quite inconvenient when my lecturer presents his ideas.'

× As I remember when I was child, that's where the first time when I touched my sister's computer, I just feel like a ball in a Chinese shop.

✓ As far as I remember, when I was a child, that was the first time I touched my sister's computer; I felt like a fish out of water.

Multiple tense and article errors: 'when I was child' needs article 'a child.' 'That's where the first time when I touched' mixes present and past; use past 'that was the first time I touched.' 'I just feel' should be past 'I felt' to match past context. 'Like a ball in a Chinese shop' is a mistranslated idiom; use an appropriate English idiom such as 'like a fish out of water.' Suggestion: 'As far as I remember, when I was a child, that was the first time I touched my sister's computer; I felt like a fish out of water.'

× However, my sister who got me to prepare for a computer test in my school.

✓ However, my sister helped me prepare for a computer test at my school.

The original is a fragment lacking a main verb structure. Use 'helped me prepare' to express the action. Also 'in my school' is better as 'at my school.' Remove unnecessary 'who.' Suggestion: 'However, my sister helped me prepare for a computer test at my school.'

× Video games had a profound impact on how I type influently uh, when I play online video game, it's required uh, the small amount of time to chat with my friends, so I have to uh chat under the pressure and it's help me accustom uh, with my laptop keyboard.

✓ Video games had a profound impact on how I type fluently. When I play online video games, I am required to spend a small amount of time chatting with my friends, so I have to chat under pressure, and it helped me become accustomed to my laptop keyboard.

Many issues: 'influently' is not a word; use 'fluently.' Separate into two sentences for clarity. 'Video game' should be plural 'video games.' 'It's required the small amount of time' is ungrammatical; use 'I am required to spend a small amount of time chatting.' 'Chat under the pressure' should be 'chat under pressure.' 'It's help me accustom with' mixes tenses and wrong verb forms; use past 'it helped me become accustomed to' or 'has helped me get accustomed to.' Use correct preposition 'to' with 'accustomed.' Suggestion: corrected sentence as above.