Typing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more concise and correct small grammar issues. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons using linking words. Avoid fillers like 'MMM' and repeat words such as 'less time consuming' and 'faster'. Replace vague phrases with concrete examples (e.g. emails, reports).

예시: I prefer typing because it is quicker and more efficient. For example, when I write emails or reports, I can edit and correct mistakes instantly, which saves time. Also, typing allows me to use spell-check and templates, so I can produce clearer documents faster.

제안: Correct pronunciation and grammar, avoid hesitations, and structure the answer: state the main fact, then give reasons and a brief comparison using linking words. Remove repetitions like 'desktop' and filler 'uh'. Use specific details about why tactile feeling matters (speed, comfort).

예시: I type every day. At work I use a desktop computer, while at home I usually use a laptop or an external USB keyboard. I prefer the desktop keyboard because its tactile keys help me type more accurately and quickly, which reduces fatigue during long typing sessions.

제안: Avoid repetition and fix grammar errors. Begin with a simple topic sentence stating the age, then add a brief supporting detail about how you learned, using linking words. Be specific about the games or method to make the answer more vivid.

예시: I learned to type when I was about eleven or twelve, after my parents bought a desktop computer for our family. To practise, I played the built-in typing games and completed drills, which helped me learn key positions and improve my speed.

제안: Good idea and structure; make it slightly more concise and add another concrete method. Use linking words to connect points and give a personal example (how often or which game) to show real practice. Avoid hedging words like 'probably' if you can be confident.

예시: I improve my typing mainly by playing typing games because they make practice enjoyable and encourage speed. In addition, I do short touch-typing exercises for 10–15 minutes daily to practise accuracy, which together has noticeably increased my WPM.

× I learned how to type on a keyboard when I was about 11 or 12 when my father and my father bought a desktop computer for me and my sister at home.

✓ I learned how to type on a keyboard when I was about 11 or 12 when my father bought a desktop computer for my sister and me at home.

Past tense issue (ID 5) and pronoun order/usage: 'my father and my father bought' is a repetition and incorrect. Use past simple 'bought' (correct) but remove duplicate subject. Also use correct object pronoun order 'my sister and me' rather than 'me and my sister'. Improve clarity by reordering.

× I prefer typing because it is faster to type and many things that we do nowadays need lesser time because everybody seems to be in a rush.

✓ I prefer typing because it is faster, and many things we do nowadays take less time because everyone seems to be in a rush.

Singular and plural issue (ID 1) and word choice: 'everybody' is fine but 'need lesser time' is incorrect; use 'take less time'. Also streamline 'it is faster to type' to 'it is faster'. Use 'everyone' or 'everybody' consistently; changed punctuation for clarity.

× I think it is a less time consuming to type and it is also easier to notice mistakes on typing as well.

✓ I think typing is less time-consuming, and it is also easier to notice mistakes when typing.

Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs (ID 13) and word form: 'a less time consuming' is ungrammatical; use the adjective phrase 'less time-consuming' before a noun or 'typing is less time-consuming'. Also use 'when typing' rather than 'on typing'. Removed redundant 'as well'.

× Everyday, usually at work, I will type on does desktop computer, but at home I mostly use a laptop or sometimes uh, USB keyboard.

✓ Every day, usually at work, I type on the desktop computer, but at home I mostly use a laptop or sometimes a USB keyboard.

Article errors (ID 22) and word form: 'Everyday' (one word) is an adjective; use 'Every day' for frequency. 'does desktop computer' is incorrect; correct to 'the desktop computer'. Add article 'a' before 'USB keyboard'. Also present simple 'I type' fits habitual action better than 'I will type'.

× But I prefer desktop uh, type desktop typing keyboard every day because it's so much more noticeable and the tactile feeling that you get from typing.

✓ But I prefer a desktop typing keyboard every day because it is much more tactile and you get better tactile feedback when typing.

Subject-verb agreement/wording issue (ID 27) and awkward phrasing: 'prefer desktop uh, type desktop typing keyboard' is ungrammatical. Use 'prefer a desktop typing keyboard'. 'So much more noticeable and the tactile feeling that you get from typing' is awkward; rephrase to 'much more tactile' and 'you get better tactile feedback' for clarity.

× The best exercise to improve your typing is probably by playing some typing games, because when you are playing the game it can seem less like work and it can motivate you to type faster because you are trying to win against the computer.

✓ The best way to improve your typing is probably to play some typing games, because when you are playing a game it seems less like work and can motivate you to type faster since you are trying to beat the computer.

Verb + -ing form issue (ID 8) and collocation: Use 'the best way to improve' rather than 'the best exercise to improve' (stylistic) and use the infinitive 'to play' after 'is probably'. Replace 'playing the game it can seem' with 'playing a game it seems' and 'win against the computer' with more natural 'beat the computer'.