Views— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答总体很好，表达自然且有情感，但可以更简洁并避免语法小错误（如冠词与单复数）。建议：①开头一句简短直接回应题意；②第二句给出1-2个具体细节（如拍摄对象或常用器材）；③使用连接词使句子更紧凑；④注意冠词和复数形式（例如“this special moments”应为“these special moments”或“this special moment”）。

예시: Yes, I do. I often photograph landscapes and city skylines when I travel because scenery helps me remember places. For example, I usually shoot sunrise over mountains with my DSLR, then share the best shots with friends online.

제안: 回答有明确立场且加入原因，但存在词汇搭配和冗长问题。建议：①开头用一句主题句直接表明偏好；②提供一到两个具体支持点（如光线、安静、构图机会）；③注意词汇搭配（“mountains views”应为“mountain views”或“mountains”）；④避免重复表达“relaxing/stunning”。

예시: I prefer rural views. The quiet countryside offers better light and unobstructed landscapes, like mountain ridges and winding rivers, which make composing photos easier and more peaceful than busy city streets.

제안: 理由明确且语气自然，但有语法小错误和可扩展空间。建议：①先用一句简洁回答；②给出具体例子（如某国的特色景观、建筑风格或光线差异）；③注意主谓一致（“landscapes feels”应为“landscapes feel”）；④可提及一个短期对比以增强说服力。

예시: I prefer views in other countries because they often offer unique landscapes and architecture. For example, I enjoyed photographing the colorful coastal villages in Portugal last year, which felt more visually striking than places I’d seen at home.

× Taking photos helps me remember this special moments and places, and I really enjoy sharing my photos on social media with friends.

✓ Taking photos helps me remember these special moments and places, and I really enjoy sharing my photos on social media with friends.

“this special moments” 中名词 moments 为复数，限定词应与之数一致。英语中应使用复数指示代词 these 而不是 this。建议把 this 改为 these。

× Personally, I prefer the views in rural areas because I'm a big fan of natural scenery like mountains views and rivers.

✓ Personally, I prefer the views in rural areas because I'm a big fan of natural scenery like mountain views and rivers.

短语 “mountains views” 中，复数名词 mountains 与名词 views 连用时应改为复合名词 mountain views（用单数名词作复合名词的前置修饰），或写成 “mountain and river views”。建议使用 mountain views 或者 改写为 views of mountains and rivers。

× It's much more stunning and relaxing and I always feel rushed when I take photos of sunsets or just enjoy the fresh air in the countryside.

✓ It's much more stunning and relaxing, and I always feel rushed when I take photos of sunsets or when I simply want to enjoy the fresh air in the countryside.

原句中并列结构缺少清晰的连接和对称性，最后的 or just enjoy 与前半句结构不平行。为保持结构平行并使意思明确，需在第二部分加上 when 或改写为 when I simply want to enjoy。建议保持时态一致并使用平行结构。

× I actually prefer the views in other countries because foreign landscapes feels more exotic and exciting.

✓ I actually prefer the views in other countries because foreign landscapes feel more exotic and exciting.

主语 foreign landscapes 为复数，谓语动词应使用复数形式 feel（而不是 feels）。这是主谓一致错误。建议将 feels 改为 feel。