Views— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Clarify and correct vocabulary mistakes, keep answers concise and structured: start with a direct topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details, using linking words. Avoid repetition (e.g., 'it's a way to') and incorrect words ('speaker' should be 'photos').

예시: Yes, I do. I especially enjoy photographing landscapes when I travel. For example, in Japan my girlfriend and I took many photos of temples and coastal scenery, which help me remember the places and the feelings I had there.

제안: Improve grammar and coherence, use linking words to organise points, and be more concise. Replace awkward phrases ('prefer using rural areas') with natural expressions ('prefer rural areas'). Give one clear reason and one specific example.

예시: I prefer rural areas because the scenery is more varied and peaceful. For instance, when I visit the countryside in China I see different landscapes—rice terraces in the south and grasslands in the north—which feel much more diverse than the similar-looking urban skylines.

제안: Make the response more direct and fluent. Begin with a clear topic sentence stating your preference (or neutrality), then support with a specific contrast and a short example. Remove hesitations and correct grammar ('there are quite different' → 'they vary a lot').

예시: I don't have a strict preference; both are interesting. For example, China itself offers diverse scenery—from deserts to mountains—so sometimes rural areas at home feel as unique as places abroad, while other times foreign landscapes offer new perspectives I enjoy.

× For example, when I went to Japan, I took a lot of speaker with my girlfriend and also I took the picture of the sceneries.

✓ For example, when I went to Japan, I took a lot of pictures with my girlfriend and also I took pictures of the scenery.

The sentence uses 'speaker' which is incorrect word choice and countable form; 'pictures' is the correct plural noun. 'The sceneries' is unnatural in English; 'scenery' is an uncountable noun referring to landscape, so use 'scenery' or 'pictures of the scenery'. Also consistent past tense 'took' is correct; only nouns needed correction.

× It's a way for me to record where I have been to and it's a way to remember.

✓ It's a way for me to record where I have been and it's a way to remember.

The phrasal verb 'have been' should not be followed by 'to' at the end in this context. Remove the redundant preposition 'to'. Use 'record where I have been' to indicate past visits.

× Personally speaking, I prefer using rural areas.

✓ Personally speaking, I prefer rural areas.

The verb 'prefer' is followed directly by a noun or gerund; 'using rural areas' is incorrect. 'Prefer rural areas' correctly expresses the preference. No quantifier needed.

× I feel in urban areas it's all just building an architecture so they aren't so different.

✓ I feel in urban areas it's all just buildings and architecture, so they are not so different.

'Building an architecture' is ungrammatical; use plural 'buildings' and 'architecture' as a separate noun. Also contract 'aren't' changed to 'are not' for clarity. The subject 'they' refers to 'buildings and architecture' so plural 'are' is correct.

× But in rural areas they are quite different views.

✓ But in rural areas there are quite different views.

Original word order implies 'they' with unclear antecedent. Use 'there are' to introduce existence of 'quite different views' — aligns with 'There be issue' pattern (but here sentence structure fix is best).

× Like in different countries they have different totally different views and even within the same country they have different views in different rural areas.

✓ For example, different countries have totally different views, and even within the same country, different rural areas have different views.

Fix word order: 'different totally different' is redundant and awkward. Move 'totally' before 'different' and restructure to clarify subject-verb alignment: 'different countries have' and 'different rural areas have'.

× So I like views in rural areas.

✓ So I like views in rural areas.

This sentence is grammatically correct; no change needed. Included for completeness.

× It's a hard question.

✓ It's a hard question.

Grammatically correct; no change needed.

× I I think like in I'm from China, in China there are totally different views in different areas.

✓ I think, since I'm from China, there are totally different views in different areas.

Remove the duplicated 'I' and restructure the clause. Use 'since I'm from China' to provide reason. Also remove extraneous 'like in' which is filler and ungrammatical here.

× So there are quite different in some areas they're quite like in another country.

✓ So some areas are quite different; in some places they are similar to those in another country.

Original sentence has missing subject after 'there are quite different'. Provide clear subjects and verbs. 'They're quite like in another country' is ungrammatical; rephrase to 'similar to those in another country' for clarity.

× So I won't say I prefer where it's a in my own country or in other countries is just different.

✓ So I won't say I prefer my own country over other countries; they are just different.

Original sentence is ungrammatical and wordy. Remove 'where it's a' and restructure to compare preferences: 'prefer my own country over other countries' and then state they are different.

× I like different views.

✓ I like different views.

This final sentence is correct as written and fits context; no correction needed.