Views— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Cevap doğal ama dağınık; tereddüt edici doldurma sözcükleri (uh, umm) ve dilbilgisi hataları (tekil/çoğul, zaman uyumsuzluğu) azaltılmalı. Cümleyi doğrudan bir konu cümlesiyle başlatın ve ardından 1–2 kısa destekleyici cümle ekleyin. Örneğin: neden fotoğraf çekmeyi sevdiğinizi, hangi tür manzaraları tercih ettiğinizi ve fotoğraflara bakmanın size ne hissettirdiğini belirtin. Bağlaçlar (because, so, and) kullanarak akışı iyileştirin ve toplamda 3-4 cümleyle sınırlayın.

예시: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because they capture memories and moods. For instance, I often photograph sunsets and city skylines, which help me relax and remember special moments. Also, I like reviewing my photos later to notice details I missed when I was there.

제안: Cümlede kelime seçimi hatası ("wheels" yerine "views") ve belirsiz ifade mevcut. Doğru kelimeyi kullanın ve bir konu cümlesiyle tercihinizi net belirtin; ardından 1–2 kısa neden verin. Bağlaçlarla mantıksal akış sağlayın. Ayrıca "have a lot of good sites" yerine "have many interesting sights" gibi daha uygun ifadeler kullanın.

예시: I prefer views in urban areas because cities offer many interesting sights and diverse architecture. For example, I enjoy photographing historic buildings and bustling streets, which give a lot of visual variety. Also, city light at night creates great photo opportunities.

제안: Cümlede sözcük hatası ("skins" yerine "scenery" veya "landscapes") ve dilbilgisi hataları (tekil/çoğul uyumsuzluğu) var; ayrıca dolgu kelimeleri sık kullanılmış. Net bir konu cümlesiyle başlayıp, her iki seçeneği kısaça karşılaştırın ve belirgin nedenler verin. Bağlaçlar (because, while, and) kullanarak karşılaştırmayı açık hale getirin. Toplam 3 cümle yeterli olacaktır.

예시: I prefer both because my country offers familiar, beautiful scenery while other countries provide different and exciting landscapes. For instance, local beaches and mountains feel comforting, whereas traveling abroad lets me photograph unusual architecture and flora. Therefore, I enjoy photographing places both at home and overseas.

× I like taking picture of various fields because, uh, when I'm look at this photo, umm, I like, I really liked it.

✓ I like taking pictures of various fields because, when I look at a photo, I really like it.

'picture' should be plural 'pictures' to match 'taking' and general activity (singular/plural mismatch). 'look' is missing appropriate form 'look' after 'when I' (present simple). 'I'm look at' is incorrect. Use 'when I look at a photo' or 'when I look at photos'. Also 'I like, I really liked it' mixes present and past; keep present 'I really like it'. Suggestion: say 'I like taking pictures of various fields because when I look at a photo I really like it.'

× Actually I prefer wheels in urban areas because these areas have a lot of good sites.

✓ Actually, I prefer views in urban areas because these areas have a lot of good sights.

The word 'wheels' is incorrect; context requires 'views' (noun choice error). 'sites' should be 'sights' when referring to attractions; this is a word choice/adjective/adverb problem. Add a comma after 'Actually'. Suggestion: use 'views' and 'sights' to convey meaning clearly.

× To my mind, I prefer both of them because my own country has a lot of good and beautiful skins, but also the other country have uh, different landscapes.

✓ To my mind, I prefer both because my own country has a lot of good and beautiful scenes, and other countries also have different landscapes.

'both of them' is acceptable but 'both' is more natural here; not a grammar error but style. 'skins' is incorrect word choice; use 'scenes' or 'sights' (singular/plural noun choice). 'the other country have' has subject-verb agreement error: use 'other countries also have' or 'the other country also has'. This involves singular/plural and subject-verb agreement. Suggestion: use 'other countries also have different landscapes' or 'the other country also has different landscapes' depending on intended meaning.