Views— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời cần ngắn gọn, tự nhiên hơn và tránh lặp từ. Nên bắt đầu bằng một câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sau đó đưa thêm 1-2 chi tiết cụ thể (ví dụ loại cảnh bạn thích, công cụ bạn dùng hoặc cảm xúc khi chụp). Tránh câu rời rạc và lỗi ngữ pháp như dùng cấu trúc không hoàn chỉnh (ví dụ "Like taking...").

예시: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different scenes. I especially like capturing coastal sunsets and rural fields because the light and colours are very dramatic, and I usually use a small mirrorless camera to get sharp images.

제안: Cần sử dụng cấu trúc ngữ pháp đúng và diễn đạt rõ ràng. Tránh lỗi số nhiều ("both of it" nên là "both of them"), dùng liên từ để kết nối lý do, và thay thế tiếng nói thân mật như "'cause" bằng "because". Hãy đưa thêm 1-2 chi tiết cụ thể về lý do (ví dụ ánh sáng, không gian, góc chụp).

예시: I prefer rural areas. They are quieter and less crowded, so I can focus on composition and natural lighting. For example, I can set up a tripod in a field at sunrise to capture the soft morning light without distractions.

제안: Cần sửa lỗi nghiêm trọng về từ vựng và ngữ pháp, tránh dùng từ sai nghĩa (ví dụ "abusing other countries" sai và mang ý tiêu cực). Trình bày mạch lạc: bắt đầu với câu chủ đề, nêu lý do cho cả hai lựa chọn và đưa ví dụ cụ thể. Sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp như "exploring" hoặc "visiting" thay vì "abusing" và tránh lặp từ như "my my".

예시: I enjoy views both at home and abroad. My country's landscapes feel familiar and meaningful to me, while seeing scenery in other countries lets me discover new cultures and different natural features. For instance, I love photographing rice terraces at home and mountain ranges abroad to compare styles and colours.

× Both of it, but I prefer rural areas more because it's simply quiet, there's not many people or animals around it, so I can take the pictures of only view it and it's so good 'cause it's beautiful.

✓ Both of them, but I prefer rural areas because they're simply quiet; there aren't many people or animals around, so I can take pictures of the view and it's very beautiful.

The student used incorrect singular/plural forms: 'Both of it' should be 'Both of them'; 'it's simply quiet' refers to 'rural areas' (plural) so use 'they're'; 'there's not many people' should be 'there aren't many people' to match plural noun; 'take the pictures of only view it' is ungrammatical and needs rephrasing to 'take pictures of the view'. Suggestion: match singular/plural between subject and verb, and simplify phrasing for clarity. Problem type ID: 1

× Yes I do, that's one of my favorite hobbies. Like taking pictures of different views from the countryside, beach or the many other picturesque views, scenery in my country. I love it.

✓ Yes I do; that's one of my favorite hobbies, like taking pictures of different views from the countryside, the beach, or other picturesque scenery in my country. I love it.

Sentence fragments and article usage caused awkwardness; 'countryside, beach' need 'the beach' and 'scenery' doesn't need plural 'views' after 'picturesque'. Although not strictly third person singular errors, ensure verbs agree: 'that's' is correct. Suggestion: combine fragments into one fluent sentence and fix articles and redundancy. Problem type ID: 2

× Both of them, certainly, because views in my country is related to me. I love my countries. I love my views my my own country views. I love abusing other countries too. Because it's kind of different.

✓ Both of them, certainly, because the views in my country are familiar to me. I love my country and its views. I also love visiting other countries because they're different.

Pronoun and noun reference errors: 'views in my country is' should be 'views ... are' (subject-verb agreement) and 'my countries' is incorrect if the speaker means one country; 'my views my my own country views' is repetitive and unclear; 'abusing other countries' is a wrong word choice—likely meant 'visiting' or 'exploring'. Suggestion: use clear pronouns and correct verb agreement, avoid repetition, and choose appropriate verbs. Problem type ID: 12

× Because it's kind of different way for me to explore the world.

✓ Because it's a kind of different way for me to explore the world.

Missing article: 'different way' requires an article 'a'. Also 'kind of different' is informal but acceptable; ensure the noun phrase is complete with 'a'. Suggestion: add the article and consider saying 'a different way' for conciseness. Problem type ID: 6