Views— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答总体自然且相关，但仍有改进空间。注意时态一致（“loved”应为现在时“love”），避免口头填充词“uh”，并将句子稍作合并以提高连贯性。可以用连接词（例如“so”, “because”, “and”）把观点与细节更紧密地衔接，保持回答在3-5句之间，提供一两个具体例子（如某次旅行拍到的场景或用的拍摄角度）。

예시: Yes, I love taking photos of different views because they help me remember special moments when I travel. For example, on my last trip to the coast I captured a dramatic sunset by using a low angle and a slow shutter speed to emphasize the waves. I also enjoy sharing these images with friends on social media, and I often try different lighting and compositions to get a better shot.

제안: 回答清晰且具体，词汇和内容贴切。可通过加入连接词（例如“because”或“for example”）和更具体的细节（如某次乡村拍摄的具体景象或拍摄时间）来增强说服力。此外可适当用更丰富的词汇替代重复的“enjoy/like”。

예시: I prefer rural views because I find natural landscapes more calming and photogenic. For example, when I photograph mountains at dawn, the soft morning light and mist create a peaceful atmosphere that’s perfect for wide-angle shots. That contrast gives me more creative opportunities than busy city scenes.

제안: 回答表达了观点但存在语法和措辞问题（如“the familiar of the comfort of familiar scenery”和“create the excitement”不自然）。建议使用更简洁的句子结构，明确对比并举例说明为何喜欢本地或外国景色，使用连接词如“however”或“on the other hand”。保持句子数量在3-4句内并注意流畅性。

예시: I enjoy both local and foreign scenery because each offers something different. At home I appreciate the comfort and familiarity of places I know well, such as the city park where the light is perfect in autumn. On the other hand, travelling abroad gives me exciting new perspectives, like the bustling markets in Marrakech that offer vivid colours and unique compositions.

× Absolutely, I loved capturing beautiful scenery Whenever I travel, taking photos helps me remember special moments and places.

✓ Absolutely, I love capturing beautiful scenery. Whenever I travel, taking photos helps me remember special moments and places.

原句将当前习惯性或喜好用過去式“loved”，但說話者接着談論一般情況（每次旅行都拍照），應使用現在時表示習慣或現在的喜好。建議將“loved”改為現在式“love”。另外原句缺少句號，將兩句拆開更清晰。

× I'd like to, uh, experiment with different angles and the lighting to get a perfect shot.

✓ I'd like to experiment with different angles and lighting to get a perfect shot.

原句中“the lighting”在此處作泛指燈光或光線時可去掉定冠詞“the”，且“I'd like to, uh, experiment”之間的語氣詞“uh”可省略以更書面和流暢。動名詞結構“experiment with ...”後接複數名詞“angles and lighting”不用加冠詞。

× I love nature scenery like mountains, rivers and fields.

✓ I love natural scenery like mountains, rivers and fields.

“nature scenery”是不正確的搭配，應使用形容詞“natural”修飾名詞“scenery”。因此改為“natural scenery”。

× I always feel refreshed when I take photos of sunsets or just enjoy the fresh air in the countryside.

✓ I always feel refreshed when I take photos of sunsets or just enjoy the fresh air in the countryside.

此句語法正確，使用現在時表示習慣性動作與感受，無需改動。保留原句。

× To be honest, I enjoy the local and the foreign scenery.

✓ To be honest, I enjoy local and foreign scenery.

原句中“the local and the foreign scenery”中定冠詞不必要，且“local and foreign scenery”作為泛指時不加“the”。因此去掉冠詞使表達更自然。

× Sometimes I appreciate the familiar of the comfort of familiar scenery, where other times I create the excitement of somewhere completely new.

✓ Sometimes I appreciate the comfort of familiar scenery; other times I enjoy the excitement of somewhere completely new.

原句結構混亂且有冗餘詞“the familiar of the comfort of familiar scenery”不通順。“appreciate the comfort of familiar scenery”為正確表達；“where other times I create the excitement”中“create”與語境不符，應為“enjoy”。使用分號或連詞連接兩個對比子句更清晰。