Views— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Jawaban Anda tidak jelas dan mengandung kesalahan tata bahasa serta kosakata. Jelaskan alasan secara spesifik, gunakan kalimat topik yang langsung menjawab, lalu beri satu atau dua detail pendukung dengan konektor. Hindari kata-kata terlalu umum seperti "full" dan hapus pengulangan serta suara ragu.

예시: Not really. I don't enjoy taking landscape photos because I find it time-consuming and I rarely carry a camera. For example, when I go out I prefer to focus on socializing rather than photographing the surroundings.

제안: Jawaban singkat dan hampir benar tapi kurang pengembangan. Berikan kalimat topik jelas lalu jelaskan mengapa dengan satu atau dua alasan spesifik menggunakan kata penghubung seperti "because" atau "because of".

예시: I prefer rural areas because I like the peaceful atmosphere and natural scenery. For instance, I enjoy walking by fields and listening to birds, which helps me relax.

제안: Jawaban mengandung bahasa percakapan tidak formal dan tense yang salah. Gunakan struktur langsung dan jelaskan alasan spesifik mengapa pemandangan luar negeri menarik Anda. Gunakan kosa kata yang tepat dan hindari kontraksi informal seperti 'wanna'.

예시: I prefer views in other countries because they often offer unique landscapes and cultural sights I haven't seen before. For example, visiting coastal towns abroad lets me experience different architecture and local customs.

× No, I don't like taking picture of different fields because it's full. Uh, I'm too lazy to take it.

✓ No, I don't like taking pictures of different fields because they're full. I'm also too lazy to take them.

The noun 'picture' should be plural ('pictures') to match 'different fields' (Grammar problem type: singular/plural). The pronoun and verb must agree: use 'they're full' referring to 'fields' and 'them' referring to 'pictures'. Combine the two short sentences for clarity: 'I'm also too lazy to take them.' Suggestions: use plural nouns when talking about multiple items and ensure pronouns agree with their antecedents. (Grammar problem type ID: 1)

× Uh, I prefer rural area.

✓ I prefer rural areas.

'Area' should be plural ('areas') or use 'the rural area' depending on meaning. Here the question contrasts urban vs rural in general, so plural 'rural areas' is appropriate. Ensure noun number matches general preference contexts. (Grammar problem type ID: 1)

× I wanna take a different view so I think another country was the best.

✓ I want to see different views, so I think another country would be best.

Mixing 'wanna' (informal present) with past tense 'was' is inconsistent. The student expresses present preference, so use present/modal: 'I want' (not 'wanna' in formal speech) and 'would be best' to indicate hypothetical preference. This corrects tense inconsistency and makes the sentence appropriate for the question. (Grammar problem type ID: 5)