Views— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is direct but too short and repetitive. To improve, begin with a clear topic sentence, add one or two specific reasons or examples, and use a linking word to connect ideas. Keep it natural and under five sentences.

예시: Yes, I enjoy photographing different views because it helps me notice details I might otherwise miss. For example, I like capturing sunrise scenes in my city since the light changes the colours dramatically, and I often share the best shots with friends.

제안: Good clear preference but expand with a brief reason and a specific detail to make it convincing. Use a linking word (e.g., because, since) to connect your reason. Keep the response concise and natural.

예시: I usually prefer views in urban areas because I enjoy the contrast of modern architecture and busy streets. For instance, tall buildings and neon lights create interesting compositions that I find more visually striking than countryside scenes.

제안: The answer states a preference but has a grammar error and lacks explanation. Correct the grammar (e.g., 'in other countries' or 'in another country') and add a short reason with an example. Use a linking word like 'because' or 'so' to connect ideas.

예시: I prefer views in other countries because they offer different culture and architecture that I can't see at home. For example, I loved photographing the colourful street markets when I visited Thailand last year because they were so vibrant and unique.

× I would like to take pictures of different views.

✓ I like to take pictures of different views.

The question asks about general preference (Do you like ...?). Using 'would like' suggests a desire now or a polite request, not a habitual preference. Use simple present 'like' to match the question and express general preference.

× I always prefer views in urban areas.

✓ I prefer views in urban areas.

The adverb 'always' is unnecessary with 'prefer' and can sound unnatural; simple present 'prefer' already indicates a general tendency. If the student really means 'at all times', they could keep 'always', but normally 'I prefer' fits best for expressing preference.

× I prefer views in another countries.

✓ I prefer views in another country.

The phrase 'another' is used with singular countable nouns. 'Countries' is plural, so it should be 'another country'. If plural is intended, use 'other countries'.