Views— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Make the answer more natural and slightly more informative. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid casual fillers like 'yeah', and add one brief specific detail explaining why you enjoy it. Keep to 1–3 sentences.

예시: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because it helps me capture memorable scenes. For example, I like photographing sunsets and city skylines to remember places I visit.

제안: The answer is unclear and contains grammar mistakes. Give a direct statement (urban or rural), then add a brief reason using a linking word. Avoid misplaced words like 'boats every'.

예시: I prefer rural views because they are quieter and more scenic, for instance I enjoy photographing rolling hills and rivers when I travel by boat.

제안: This reply is repetitive and grammatically incorrect. Give a clear preference, a concise reason, and one specific example. Use linking words (‘because’, ‘for example’) and correct sentence structure.

예시: I prefer views in my own country because they feel more familiar and culturally rich; for example, I love photographing traditional festivals and historic buildings at home.

× I do like taking pictures of different views.

✓ I do like taking pictures of different views.

No correction needed. The sentence correctly uses the present participle 'taking' after 'like'. Keep as is.

× I do prefer views in boats every actually.

✓ I actually prefer views from boats.

Original sentence has awkward word order and incorrect preposition. 'Every actually' is incorrect; 'actually' should come before the verb. Use the preposition 'from' with 'views' to indicate perspective and place the adverb 'actually' before 'prefer' for natural word order.

× I prefer my own country because it more culturally than the other country one.

✓ I prefer my own country because it is more culturally rich than other countries.

The pronoun 'it' requires a verb 'is' (be issue / sentence structure). 'More culturally' is incomplete; pair with an adjective like 'rich' to compare cultural attributes. 'The other country one' is ungrammatical—use 'other countries' for a general comparison.

× I do not prefer the countries, the other countries I mean.

✓ I do not prefer other countries.

Redundant and awkward repetition. Use concise structure: 'I do not prefer other countries.' This removes unnecessary article 'the' and the repeated phrase.