Views— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more concise and grammatical: start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific details with linking words. Avoid repetition (e.g., "I do like" twice) and correct grammar (use singular/plural and articles). Also vary vocabulary (e.g., "shades" or "hues" instead of "color").

예시: Yes, I enjoy photographing different views, especially the sky. For example, I often capture the changing hues at sunrise and sunset because the light creates dramatic colours. In winter the sky tends to be paler and more subdued, which I find very atmospheric.

제안: Begin with a direct answer, then compare the two with specific reasons using linking words (e.g., "because", "while"). Fix grammar (use present participles and correct verb forms) and avoid unclear words. Give one concrete example of a scene you like in each setting.

예시: I like both urban and rural views because they offer different photographic opportunities. For instance, urban scenes provide interesting architecture and night lights, while rural areas offer natural landscapes and peaceful skies. Because of that variety, I often switch between the two depending on the mood I want to capture.

제안: Answer directly, correct grammar (use "prefer" + gerund or noun, correct verb agreement), and be specific about what attracts you to foreign views. Avoid vague phrases and finish sentences clearly. Mention a concrete example (a place or feature) and a reason why it’s appealing.

예시: I prefer views in other countries, especially mountainous areas in places like the Alps or the Rocky Mountains, because the scale and textures are different from my home country. For example, I love photographing dramatic peaks at sunrise when the light highlights the ridges, giving a sense of grandeur.

× Of course, I do like taking pictures of different views, especially the sky.

✓ Of course, I like taking pictures of different views, especially of the sky.

The use of 'do' for emphasis is unnecessary in a neutral answer and can sound unnatural. Remove the auxiliary 'do' unless you intend strong emphasis. Also include the preposition 'of' before 'the sky' for correctness: 'pictures of the sky'. Suggestion: Use 'I like' for simple present statements unless you want emphasis: 'I do like' -> 'I like'.

× I do like taking the different color of sky every single day.

✓ I like capturing the different colors of the sky every single day.

Original sentence has awkward noun/adjective structure: 'taking the different color of sky' is ungrammatical. Replace 'taking' with 'capturing' or 'taking pictures of', and pluralize 'colors' to match 'different' and 'every single day'. Add 'the' before 'sky'. Suggestion: Use 'capture/take pictures of the different colors of the sky'.

× In the winter, the color of sky is even.

✓ In the winter, the color of the sky is even.

Missing definite article 'the' before 'sky'. Also 'is even' is vague but may be intended; grammatically, include 'the'. Suggestion: Say 'the color of the sky is even' or better 'the sky often has a uniform color in winter'.

× Bill both urban areas and rural areas gave the different vibe and tone of the pictures.

✓ Both urban and rural areas give different vibes and tones to the pictures.

'Bill' appears to be a typo or stray word and must be removed. Use plural 'areas' appropriately and match verb tense and number: 'give' for plural subject 'both urban and rural areas'. Use plural 'vibes' and 'tones' to match 'different'. Also preposition 'to' is needed: 'to the pictures'. Suggestion: 'Both urban and rural areas give different vibes and tones to photos.'

× I personally enjoying both area for taking pictures.

✓ I personally enjoy both areas for taking pictures.

Verb form error: after subject 'I' use base form 'enjoy' not 'enjoying'. Also pluralize 'area' to 'areas'. Preposition 'for' is okay, or you can say 'when taking pictures'. Suggestion: 'I personally enjoy both areas when taking pictures.'

× I prefer using other countries like Western view countries in America or Europe country because I personally has passionate about taking picture of the Mountain View that's so.

✓ I prefer being in other countries, such as those in America or Europe, because I am passionate about taking pictures of mountain views.

Multiple errors: 'prefer using other countries' is incorrect — use 'prefer being in' or 'prefer visiting'. 'Western view countries' is unclear; 'countries in America or Europe' is better. Subject-verb agreement: 'I personally has' should be 'I am' or 'I am passionate' (ID 27 and 6 but main fixes are preposition and verb). 'Taking picture' should be plural 'taking pictures'. 'Mountain View' should be 'mountain views' and phrase 'that's so' is unnecessary and ungrammatical. Overall restructure the sentence for clarity and correct prepositions and verb forms. Suggestion: 'I prefer visiting other countries, such as those in America or Europe, because I am passionate about taking pictures of mountain views.'