Views— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Answer the examiner’s question directly. Your response repeated the question instead of giving your opinion. Provide a clear topic sentence (Yes/No and brief reason), then one or two short supporting details using a linking word. Keep it natural and under five sentences.

예시: Yes, I do like taking pictures of different views because I enjoy capturing interesting scenes. For example, I often photograph city skylines and seaside sunsets to remember the atmosphere. Moreover, taking photos helps me notice small details I would otherwise miss.

제안: Good direct answer, but expand with a linked reason and a specific detail to make it more informative. Use a linking word (because, because of, since) and add one example to illustrate your preference. Keep to a maximum of five sentences.

예시: I prefer views in urban areas because I like the energy and variety of buildings and street life. For example, I enjoy photographing modern skyscrapers, busy markets, and colourful street art, which give each photo a different mood.

제안: Your answer is off-topic and unclear—examiner asked about views (scenery), but you spoke about meals and relaxation. First, answer directly about views in your country vs other countries. Then give a reason and a specific example. Use linking words (because, for instance) and avoid irrelevant topics.

예시: I prefer views in other countries because they often look very different from what I’m used to. For instance, when I visited China I loved photographing traditional temples and narrow alleys, which felt exotic and relaxing compared with familiar local scenery.

× I prefer meals in other countries like China.

✓ I prefer views in other countries, like China.

The student used 'meals' instead of 'views', which is a word choice error but also creates a pronoun/reference problem relative to the question about 'views'. Replace 'meals' with 'views' to match the question and maintain meaning; add a comma before 'like China' for clarity. Suggestion: Read the question carefully to keep key vocabulary consistent and use parallel words (views → views).

× They are most of the place that when I see the situation or the view, I will feel relaxed.

✓ Most of the time, when I see those views or the scenery, I feel relaxed.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and contains several issues: 'They are most of the place' is meaningless and 'when I see the situation or the view' is awkward. The corrected sentence uses a proper time phrase ('Most of the time'), replaces vague nouns with 'those views or the scenery', and uses the simple present 'I feel' to express habitual reaction. Use clear subject and adverbial order: time phrase, conditional clause, main clause. Suggestion: Express habitual reactions with simple present tense and use clear time expressions ('most of the time', 'usually'). Replace vague nouns ('situation') with specific ones relevant to the context ('views', 'scenery').