Views— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Improve grammar (verb forms and articles), reduce redundancy, and organize into a clear topic sentence plus 1–2 supporting details using linking words. Aim for specific vocabulary (e.g., 'landscapes', 'portraits', 'events') and avoid repeated words like 'click' and 'taking'.

예시: Yes, I enjoy photographing different views. For example, I often take landscape photos of natural scenes like mountains and rainy forests, and I also photograph family events such as birthday parties. Therefore, I keep both memories and variety in my photos.

제안: Answer directly with a clear preference, then give specific reasons and examples. Correct grammar (subject–verb agreement, prepositions) and use linking words (however, but, also). Replace informal verbs like 'click' with 'take' or 'photograph'.

예시: It depends on the situation, but I usually prefer rural views because I live in the countryside and enjoy photographing mountains and parks. However, when I visit a city I also photograph tall buildings and busy streets to capture a different atmosphere.

제안: Be concise and factual: state your preference, give a specific example with correct place names and grammar, and avoid filler words like 'uh'. Use linking words (for example, because) and accurate vocabulary for places (e.g., 'Banff' if you mean that).

예시: I prefer photographing views in my current country because Canada offers many stunning locations. For example, where I live in Alberta I often visit Banff, which has beautiful lakes and mountains, so I like to photograph those landscapes.

× Yes, I like to taking pictures of different views.

✓ Yes, I like taking pictures of different views.

The verb 'like' is followed by the base verb or the gerund. Using 'to taking' mixes the infinitive marker 'to' with a gerund. Use 'like taking' or 'like to take'. Suggestion: say 'I like taking pictures' or 'I like to take pictures.'

× Mostly I prefer to taking a pictures of natural beauty and rainy rain and as well as I will click the pictures of birthday parties and many other occasions like we have get together in our home.

✓ Mostly I prefer taking pictures of natural beauty and rain, and I also take pictures of birthday parties and many other occasions like family get-togethers at home.

Multiple issues: 'prefer' is followed by the gerund not 'to taking'; 'a pictures' mixes singular article with plural noun; 'rainy rain' is redundant; 'as well as I will click' is awkward and uses future unnecessarily; 'we have get together' is incorrect verb form. Suggestions: use 'prefer taking', remove redundant words, use plural/singular consistently, and use 'take pictures' instead of 'click' for natural English. Related grammar types: Verb + -ing form (8), Article errors (22).

× So I love to click the pictures for a long lasting memories.

✓ So I love taking pictures to preserve long-lasting memories.

Again, 'love' can be followed by gerund or infinitive; 'love to click the pictures' is nonstandard in some varieties — use 'love taking pictures'. 'a long lasting memories' mixes singular article 'a' with plural 'memories' and missing hyphen in 'long-lasting'. Suggestion: 'take' or 'take photos' and make nouns/phrases agree. Related grammar types: Verb + -ing form (8), Article errors (22).

× Well it's depend upon on situation.

✓ Well, it depends on the situation.

Subject 'it' requires third-person singular verb 'depends'. 'depend' is base form causing subject-verb agreement error. Also 'upon on' is redundant; use 'on' or 'upon'. Suggestion: 'It depends on the situation.' Related grammar types: Third person singular issue (2), Incorrect use of prepositions (11).

× I have a I'm living in a rural area so I mostly prefer to click the views in my near locality.

✓ I am living in a rural area, so I mostly prefer to photograph the views in my nearby neighborhood.

Fragmented structure 'I have a I'm living' is incorrect; use a single correct clause. 'prefer to click the views' should be 'prefer to photograph' or 'prefer taking pictures of the views'. 'near locality' is unnatural; use 'nearby neighborhood' or 'local area'. Suggestion: simplify to one clear sentence and correct word choices. Related grammar types: Sentence structure errors (26), Verb + -ing form (8).

× So I click the pictures of mountains or ray parks as well as if we I get a chance to go to the urban area.

✓ So I take pictures of mountains or nearby parks, and if I get a chance to go to an urban area, I do the same there.

'Click the pictures' is nonstandard; use 'take pictures'. 'ray parks' seems to be a mistake for 'nearby parks'. 'as well as if we I get' is ungrammatical; simplify to 'if I get a chance'. Also use article 'an' before 'urban area'. Suggestion: use clear conditional structure and correct noun phrases. Related grammar types: Verb in the present participle form (10), Incorrect use of pronouns (12), Article errors (22).

× So I click the pictures of tall buildings and many more.

✓ So I take pictures of tall buildings and many other things.

Use 'take pictures' instead of 'click the pictures' for natural English. 'many more' is vague; 'many other things' or 'many other subjects' is clearer. Suggestion: prefer 'take pictures of' and be specific when possible.

× Right now I'm living in a Canada, so Canada having a lots of, uh, places where I can visit and click the pictures and see the views.

✓ Right now I'm living in Canada, and Canada has a lot of places where I can visit, take pictures, and enjoy the views.

Do not use the definite article 'a' before country names like 'Canada'. 'having a lots of' is ungrammatical: use 'has a lot of' or 'has lots of'. 'click the pictures' should be 'take pictures'. Suggestion: use correct verb 'has' and remove the article before country names. Related grammar types: Article errors (22), Singular and plural issue (1), Verb + -ing form (8).

× Uh, for example, I'm living in Alberta, so Alberta having a beautiful place, Bath.

✓ For example, I live in Alberta, and Alberta has a beautiful place called Banff.

Use simple present 'I live' for habitual fact; 'Alberta having' is incorrect structure; use 'Alberta has'. 'Bath' likely misnaming 'Banff' (a well-known place in Alberta). Suggestion: use 'called' to introduce place names and correct the name if intended. Related grammar types: Sentence structure errors (26), Verb in the present participle form (10).

× So bath have very beautiful lakes and mountains.

✓ So Banff has very beautiful lakes and mountains.

Place name 'Banff' is singular and requires 'has' (third-person singular). 'bath have' is incorrect subject-verb agreement and likely a misspelling. Suggestion: ensure correct place name and use 'has'. Related grammar types: Third person singular issue (2), Singular and plural issue (1).

× So I always prefer to visit there and click the pictures and see the views.

✓ So I always prefer visiting there to take pictures and enjoy the views.

After 'prefer', use gerund 'visiting' or say 'prefer to visit'. Use consistent verb choice: 'take pictures' rather than 'click'. Suggestion: 'I prefer visiting there to take pictures.'