Views— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Improve clarity, grammar and coherence: start with a clear topic sentence, correct grammar (e.g., plural/singular, articles, verb forms), and avoid unclear phrases like "Sunset Tree" and "planned life." Use linking words to connect ideas and keep answer within 2–4 sentences. Add one specific example to make content more vivid.

예시: Yes, I love taking pictures of different views, especially natural scenery. For example, I often photograph sunsets over the lake because the colours calm me and help preserve memories of places I visit. I usually take photos when I walk in the park or go on weekend hikes.

제안: Make a direct answer (choose one or say both clearly), correct vocabulary ("board" is incorrect), improve sentence structure and reduce fillers (um, like, you know). Use linking words to explain reasons and give one specific example to support your preference. Keep to 2–3 concise sentences.

예시: I don't have a strong preference because urban and rural views both interest me. Urban scenes offer striking architecture, while rural landscapes provide peaceful nature — for instance, I like photographing city skylines at night and quiet country fields at dawn.

제안: Provide a clear direct answer, fix vocabulary errors ("bored" wrong word), and avoid repetition. State a concise opinion, then give a specific reason and an example. Use linking words such as "because" and "for example" to improve coherence.

예시: I prefer views from both my country and other countries because every place has unique attractions. For example, my country has familiar coastal scenes, while abroad I enjoy discovering distinctive architecture and landscapes I haven't seen before.

× I especially enjoy photographing natural scenery, things like the sky at Sunset Tree and planned life because taking this picture made me feel calm and helps me keep memories of beautiful places.

✓ I especially enjoy photographing natural scenery, things like the sky at sunset, trees and plant life, because taking these pictures makes me feel calm and helps me keep memories of beautiful places.

Errors: incorrect noun forms and capitalization ('Sunset Tree' -> 'sunset, trees'), 'planned life' is incorrect for 'plant life', mismatch in number between 'taking this picture' and plural 'pictures' later, tense/agreement: 'taking these pictures makes' (singular verb 'makes' with gerund phrase) and 'helps' should agree with subject. Suggestion: Use correct vocabulary 'plant life', keep consistent plurality ('these pictures'), use lowercase for common nouns like 'sunset' and plural nouns for multiple items ('trees'). Second sentence: 'I often take photo when I go for walk in the park or on weekend hikes.' -> 'I often take photos when I go for a walk in the park or on weekend hikes.' Explanation: missing plural for 'photos', missing articles 'a' before 'walk', and missing preposition/number agreement. Use 'take photos' and 'a walk'.

× I often take photo when I go for walk in the park or on weekend hikes.

✓ I often take photos when I go for a walk in the park or on weekend hikes.

Errors: 'photo' should be plural 'photos' when referring to photographs in general. 'for walk' needs an article 'a walk'. Suggestion: Use plural nouns when speaking generally ('photos') and include the indefinite article before singular countable nouns ('a walk').

× Umm, for me, I think I do prefer board of things because I think each places they have their own unique style or like the nature style, you know, so I don't mind and can choose like which one to take because I prefer like board and yeah.

✓ Umm, for me, I think I prefer a broad range of things because I think each place has its own unique style, like different natural styles, so I don't mind and can choose which ones to photograph because I prefer variety.

Errors: 'board of things' is incorrect phrase; should be 'a broad range' or 'variety'. 'each places they have' has plural/singular mismatch and redundant pronoun; correct is 'each place has'. 'which one to take' should be 'which ones to photograph' to match plural 'things'. Suggestions: Use correct collocations ('a broad range', 'variety'), ensure subject-verb agreement ('each place has') and avoid redundancy by not repeating subjects ('they'). Use precise verbs like 'photograph'.

× I would say I prefer bored because like as I say, the last question that each places, they have their own unique, unique like things in themselves.

✓ I would say I prefer border? (likely 'bored' is wrong) I mean I prefer variety because, as I said in the last question, each place has its own unique features.

Errors: The student used 'bored' or 'bored' incorrectly; likely intended 'border' or 'broad' or 'abroad' or 'variety'—context implies 'variety' or 'both'. Pronoun and noun agreement errors: 'each places, they have' should be 'each place has'. 'unique, unique like things in themselves' is redundant and ungrammatical. Suggestions: Choose the correct word ('variety' or 'both' or 'abroad') and use 'each place has' for subject-verb agreement; avoid repetition and use 'unique features' or 'distinct characteristics'.

× So I think yeah, every places in this world are beautiful.

✓ So I think, yeah, every place in this world is beautiful.

Error: 'every places' mixes 'every' (which requires a singular noun) with a plural noun 'places'; correct is 'every place'. Also use singular verb 'is' to agree with 'every place'. Suggestion: With quantifiers like 'every' use singular nouns and verbs ('every place is').