Views— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Cần sửa ngữ pháp và chọn từ chính xác hơn; trả lời trực tiếp, rõ ràng và ngắn gọn (không quá 5 câu). Thêm liên từ để mạch lạc và cung cấp chi tiết cụ thể hơn (ví dụ: loại cảnh, khoảnh khắc đặc biệt). Ví dụ cụ thể: dùng ‘remember’ thay vì ‘recall moment’, sửa động từ sai (refer → prefer), và sửa lỗi chính tả (plane cabs, fight food).

예시: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different places because they help me remember special moments with friends and family. For example, when I travel I take pictures of landscapes, local streets and meals so I can look back and remember the trip. These photos also help me share experiences with others and keep memories alive.

제안: Cần trả lời trực tiếp không dùng ‘Yes’ cho câu lựa chọn; sửa lỗi từ (refer → prefer), ngữ pháp (coffee → cafés, paths → pathways), và rút gọn câu để tự nhiên. Dùng liên từ như ‘because’ hợp lý và bổ sung chi tiết cụ thể (ví dụ: loại quán cà phê, hoạt động bạn làm).

예시: I prefer urban views because my city has many cosy cafés and tree‑lined streets where I meet friends. For instance, we often sit in a small café at the weekend to chat for an hour and watch people passing by, which I find relaxing.

제안: Cần dùng từ chính xác và sửa cấu trúc câu (refer → prefer; boss → places?), tránh lặp từ và lỗi ngữ pháp. Trả lời trực tiếp, giải thích rõ lý do với ví dụ cụ thể về địa điểm và cảm xúc. Giữ tối đa 5 câu và dùng liên từ để mạch lạc.

예시: I prefer views in my own country because there are many beautiful scenic spots near my hometown that feel familiar and meaningful. For example, my family and I often visit a nearby lake and small mountain village, and those trips create lasting happy memories for us.

× Yes, I refer taking photos of different things because I want to recall moment with friends and family.

✓ Yes, I prefer taking photos of different things because I want to recall moments with friends and family.

The student used 'refer' incorrectly; the correct verb is 'prefer'. 'Prefer' is followed by a gerund (-ing), so 'taking' is correct. Also 'moment' should be plural 'moments' because it refers to multiple instances. Suggestion: use 'prefer taking photos' and pluralize countable nouns when referring to more than one.

× For example, when I travel I usually take pictures of plane cabs and fight food so I can look back on the.

✓ For example, when I travel I usually take pictures of plane, cabs, and flight food so I can look back on them.

Sentence fragments and wrong words: 'fight' is a misspelling of 'flight'; 'on the' is incomplete and should be 'on them' referring to pictures. Also list items need commas and 'plane' may need context (e.g., 'airplane'). Suggestion: ensure correct word choice, complete pronoun references, and proper punctuation in lists.

× Yes, I refer urban areas because my city has many coffee and paths where I can meet friends and make memo memorial memo memories.

✓ Yes, I prefer urban areas because my city has many cafes and paths where I can meet friends and make memories.

Again 'refer' is incorrect; use 'prefer' followed by the noun or gerund. 'Coffee' should be 'cafes' (plural of cafe) to match 'many'; redundant words 'memo memorial memo' should be corrected to 'memories'. Suggestion: choose correct verbs, pluralize countable nouns, and remove repetition.

× For example, we often sit in a small cafe on weekend and talk for hour.

✓ For example, we often sit in a small cafe on the weekend and talk for an hour.

Missing definite article 'the' before 'weekend' in this context and missing indefinite article 'an' before 'hour'. Use 'on the weekend' or 'at the weekend' and 'for an hour' for duration. Suggestion: add appropriate articles for time expressions and durations.

× I refer views in my own country because it has many beautiful scenic places in my hometown.

✓ I prefer views in my own country because it has many beautiful scenic places around my hometown.

Use 'prefer' instead of 'refer'. 'Scenic places in my hometown' is slightly awkward; 'around my hometown' clarifies location. Suggestion: use correct verb and clearer prepositional phrase.

× I often travel with friends and family to those boss to recall happy memories so they feel more special to me.

✓ I often travel with friends and family to those places to recall happy memories so they feel more special to me.

'Boss' is a wrong word; 'places' fits context. Preposition 'to those places' is correct for destination. The clause 'so they feel more special to me' is acceptable but could be 'so they feel more special' or 'so those places feel more special to me.' Suggestion: choose context-appropriate nouns and ensure prepositions match the noun.