Views— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is generally good: it has a clear topic sentence and specific examples. To improve, remove the conversational question at the end (“Remember how they made me feel?”) because it is unnecessary and slightly informal. Keep responses within 3–4 concise sentences and vary vocabulary slightly (e.g., use verbs like “capture” or adjectives like “stunning” instead of repeating similar words). Add a linking phrase before the example (e.g., “For instance,”) to improve coherence.

예시: Yes, I enjoy photographing different views because it lets me preserve special moments from my trips. For instance, when I go hiking I capture sweeping mountain ridges, wide panoramas and golden sunsets so I can share those stunning scenes with my friends and family.

제안: This is a strong, well-organized response with a clear reason and supporting details. To reach a higher score, correct the small grammar slip (“let” → “lets” or rephrase), add a linking word to connect points (e.g., “Furthermore,”), and include a brief specific example or comparison to strengthen content (e.g., mention a particular rural location or a specific urban problem).

예시: I prefer rural areas because escaping the city's noise and crowds lets me relax in tranquil natural surroundings. Furthermore, the fresh air and simple pleasures — like walking along quiet country lanes or listening to birdsong — help me feel calm and refreshed, whereas city views often seem crowded and polluted.

제안: Good direct answer with specific examples. Improve by tightening grammar (“in lively atmosphere” → “in a lively atmosphere”) and adding a linking word (e.g., “Moreover,” or “For example,” already used but could be preceded). Also give one brief reason why these differences matter to you (e.g., learning about culture or photography opportunities). Keep it to 2–3 sentences and use a bit wider vocabulary (e.g., “distinctive architecture,” “vibrant markets”).

예시: I prefer views in other countries because distinctive landscapes and architecture showcase different traditions. For example, exploring historic temples and vibrant markets abroad gives me unique photo opportunities and a chance to learn about local culture, which I don't usually experience at home.

× Remember how they made me feel?

✓ Do you remember how they made me feel?

The original sentence omits the auxiliary verb 'do' required for forming a present simple question. Use 'Do you remember...' to create a proper question. Suggestion: add the auxiliary verb 'do' when making present simple yes/no or WH-questions in English.

× I prefer rural areas because escaping the city's noise and crowds let me relax in tranquil, natural surroundings.

✓ I prefer rural areas because escaping the city's noise and crowds lets me relax in tranquil, natural surroundings.

The subject of the verb 'let' is the gerund phrase 'escaping the city's noise and crowds', which is treated as singular, so the verb needs the third person singular ending 's' (lets). Suggestion: with gerund phrases or singular subjects in present simple, add 's' for third person singular verbs.

× I love exploring historic temples and colorful markets abroad, which offer new sights in lively atmosphere I don't usually find at home.

✓ I love exploring historic temples and colorful markets abroad, which offer new sights in a lively atmosphere I don't usually find at home.

The phrase 'in lively atmosphere' is missing the indefinite article 'a' before 'lively atmosphere'. English requires 'a' when referring to a singular, countable noun in a non-specific sense. Suggestion: include 'a' before singular, countable noun phrases like 'lively atmosphere'.