Views— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Expand your answer with a clear topic sentence and at least one specific reason or example. Use one or two linking words to make it more natural. Keep it under five sentences and avoid single-word replies.

예시: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because it helps me remember places and practice photography. For example, when I visit a park I often photograph the trees and pond to capture the light at different times of day.

제안: Correct the vocabulary and give a short reason. Start with a direct topic sentence (I prefer...) then add one supporting detail using a linking word like because or so. Aim for clear grammar and avoid fragments.

예시: I prefer views in rural areas because I like wide open spaces and natural scenery. For instance, the mountains and fields are more relaxing than busy city streets.

제안: Make a single clear statement about preference and give a specific reason with correct grammar. Use linking words (because, so) to connect ideas and avoid repeating words or unclear phrasing.

예시: I prefer views in other countries because I can see landscapes that we don't have here, such as coastal cliffs or alpine valleys. For example, when I traveled abroad I photographed dramatic coastlines that are very different from the flat city scenery at home.

× Actually a rule areas.

✓ Actually, rural areas.

The student used the wrong word 'rule' instead of 'rural' and included an unnecessary article 'a' before the plural noun 'areas'. This is a sentence structure and word choice error. Suggestion: use the correct adjective 'rural' and match number: 'rural areas'. Also include a comma after 'Actually' for natural speech: 'Actually, rural areas.'

× Actually another countries because I don't have a views here, my country because I'm city.

✓ Actually, other countries, because I don't have any views here in my country; I'm from a city.

Multiple errors: 'another countries' is incorrect because 'another' cannot modify plural nouns—use 'other countries'. 'I don't have a views' uses plural 'views' with 'a'—use 'any views' or drop article. 'my country because I'm city' lacks preposition/article and verb: say 'in my country; I'm from a city' or 'because I'm from a city'. Suggestions: use 'other countries' for plural contrast, use 'any' with plural countable nouns in negative sentences, and include 'from' and an article or adjective when describing origin: 'I'm from a city.' Also add commas/semicolons to separate clauses for clarity.