Views— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: حاول تنظيم الإجابة بجملة موضوعية واضحة ثم إضافة تفاصيل داعمة مختصرة. ركّز على القواعد الأساسية: استخدم صيغة المفرد/الجمع الصحيحة (a picture/ pictures)، وصياغة زمن مناسبة (it lets me) وعبارات توضيحية لشرح لماذا تحب التصوير. تجنّب التكرار وقلل عدد الجمل إلى 2-4 جمل مترابطة باستخدام روابط مثل because وso and to remember.

예시: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because they help me remember special moments. For example, I often photograph city skylines and beaches so I can look back at the scenery later.

제안: أعد صياغة الإجابة بجملة مباشرة تعبر عن تفضيلك ثم أضف سببًا محددًا. استخدم مفردات دقيقة (urban/rural, lots of light, natural light) واحرص على ربط الجمل بكلمات روابط مثل because أو so. تجنّب كلمات غير واضحة مثل “national light” واستبدلها بمصطلحات صحيحة.

예시: I prefer urban views because cities often have many interesting lights and architectural details. For instance, I like photographing illuminated streets and modern buildings at night because the lighting creates dramatic photos.

제안: ابدأ بجملة واضحة عن تفضيلك (my country/other countries) ثم قدم سببًا محددًا ومرتبًا. استخدم مفردات مناسبة لوصف الطبيعة (desert, greenery, water, landscapes) وصحح الأخطاء النحوية مثل تكرار الكلمات وتركيب الجملة. حاول أن تكون الجملة مكوّنة من 2-3 جمل متصلة باستخدام روابط مثل because وso.

예시: I prefer views in other countries because there is more greenery and water compared to my country. For example, I enjoy photographing lakes and forests abroad because they offer colorful and varied landscapes.

× I like to take picture and different views because it's let me in the future when I want to inside the photos.

✓ I like to take pictures of different views because they will let me remember the places in the future when I look at the photos.

The noun 'picture' should be plural 'pictures' because the student refers to multiple photos (singular/plural issue). 'Different views' needs the preposition 'of' to show what the pictures are of (preposition issue, but we only correct items listed; plural correction is primary). 'It's let me' is incorrect verb form and meaning; use 'they will let me remember' to match future reference and plural subject. Also 'when I want to inside the photos' is ungrammatical; corrected to 'when I look at the photos'. Suggestion: use plural nouns for countable items when referring to more than one and ensure verbs agree with plural subjects, and use appropriate verbs like 'look at' or 'remember'.

× In my view I prefer views and even Airbnbs because have so many light like national light.

✓ In my view, I prefer city views and even Airbnbs because they have so much light, like natural light.

The sentence lacks a subject for 'have' and uses 'light' and 'national' incorrectly. Add 'they' to agree with plural subject (subject-verb agreement) and change 'so many light' to 'so much light' because 'light' is an uncountable noun (quantifier choice). 'National light' is likely a mispronunciation of 'natural light', so correct that. Suggestion: include the subject before verbs, use 'so much' for uncountable nouns, and use 'natural' for sunlight or interior brightness.

× I I prefer fusion other country because our country is desert with no type like green blaze like water and.

✓ I prefer to travel to other countries because our country is a desert with no greenery or bodies of water.

The original has repeated 'I I', an unclear word 'fusion', and fragmentary phrasing 'no type like green blaze like water and'. This is a sentence structure error. Replace 'fusion' with 'to travel to' or 'visiting', and rephrase the description of the homeland: 'a desert with no greenery or bodies of water.' Suggestion: avoid repetition, use clear verbs like 'prefer to travel to', and express contrasts with concise nouns (greenery, bodies of water).