Music— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng hơn, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng sai (ví dụ “SAS” nên là “sad”), dùng câu chủ đề trực tiếp, thêm 1–2 chi tiết cụ thể và liên kết hợp lý. Cố gắng không lặp từ và giới hạn trong tối đa 5 câu. Ví dụ chỉnh sửa ngữ pháp: thay “I feel uncomfortable on sadness about a story” bằng “I feel uncomfortable when music reminds me of sad stories.”

예시: I prefer happy music to sad music because sad songs often remind me of difficult memories. For example, when a song tells a sad story it makes me feel unsettled, so I usually choose upbeat tracks to lift my mood.

제안: Cần trả lời trực tiếp (Yes/No) rồi giải thích rõ ràng với lý do cụ thể. Sửa ngữ pháp (ví dụ “it's not really” → “not really”) và loại bỏ những phần vô nghĩa (“it's not always air some music”). Dùng liên từ để kết nối ý (e.g., ‘however’, ‘because’). Giữ câu gọn trong tối đa 5 câu.

예시: Not really — happy music doesn't always make me excited. Sometimes it simply helps me relax or feel comfortable, but other times I prefer energetic songs with strong beats if I want to feel excited.

× Umm I think I prefer SAS music and happy music because I feel uncomfortable on sadness about a story or umm.

✓ Umm I think I prefer sad and happy music because I feel uncomfortable with sadness in a story.

Problem type ID:26. The original sentence has wrong word 'SAS' (likely 'sad'), incorrect preposition 'on' and awkward phrase 'uncomfortable on sadness about a story'. Use 'sad' not 'SAS', use the preposition 'with' after 'uncomfortable', and simplify 'sadness in a story' for clarity. Suggestion: read the sentence aloud, replace incorrect words, and use 'uncomfortable with' + noun phrase. Note: This suggestion addresses errors listed in the provided types (sentence structure and preposition use).

× I think it's not really I think make me feel more excited, especially is having happy music is sometime it's not always air some music.

✓ I don't think it really makes me feel more excited. Sometimes happy music does, but not always.

Problem type ID:26 and 27. Multiple issues: incorrect negation and subject-verb agreement ('I think it's not really I think make me' should be 'I don't think it really makes me'), wrong word order and extra words ('especially is having' and 'air some music'). Break into two clear sentences: a negative statement and a qualifier. Use third person singular 'makes' to agree with 'it'. Suggestion: simplify complex clauses, ensure subject-verb agreement, and remove redundant words.