Music— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Give a slightly longer, more natural response with a clear topic sentence and one or two specific supporting reasons or examples. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid filler words like “Uh.” Keep it under five sentences.

예시: I prefer happy music because it lifts my mood and helps me stay focused while working. For example, I often listen to upbeat pop or acoustic songs in the morning, which makes me feel energetic and ready for the day.

제안: Expand the answer with a topic sentence and a specific reason or example using a linking word. Avoid short yes/no replies; one or two extra sentences will make the response more natural and informative.

예시: Yes, happy music definitely makes me feel more excited because of its fast tempo and positive lyrics. For instance, when I listen to dance tracks before going out with friends, I feel more energetic and eager to join in the fun.

× Uh, I prefer happy music.

✓ Uh, I prefer happy music.

No correction needed. The verb 'prefer' agrees with the first-person subject 'I', so there is no third person singular error. Keep as is.

× Oh yes it does.

✓ Oh yes, it does.

The original sentence is grammatically correct in terms of verb agreement: 'does' correctly matches the third-person singular subject implied ('happy music'). The only issue is punctuation; add a comma after 'yes' to reflect natural spoken pause. No change to verb form is needed.