Music— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 答题要更直接并更自然地回应考官问题，开头应明确表明偏好（例如‘I prefer happy/energetic music’），然后用一到两句具体细节支持。注意避免口语化的短语过多（如“Guess what?”），并控制在不超过五句。可以用连词（because, so, for example）使表达更连贯。

예시: I prefer happy, energetic music because it lifts my mood and motivates me. For example, ‘Dance Monkey’ always makes me feel alive and excited, and I even performed it in a singing contest, where I won first prize.

제안: 回答简洁且有个人细节是好的，但可以更自然地衔接句子并使用更恰当的词汇（如 ‘upbeat’ 或 ‘energetic’ 替代 ‘wild’）。增加一两句说明原因或结果会更有说服力，同时保持句数不多于五句。使用连接词（for example, because, so）提升连贯性。

예시: Yes, I usually feel more excited when I listen to upbeat music because the rhythm boosts my energy. For example, I often play energetic songs in the shower, and as soon as the music starts I imagine myself as a superstar and my mood instantly improves.

× Well, I'm quizzed about energetic music.

✓ Well, I was asked about energetic music.

原句使用了被动短语“I'm quizzed about”在此语境不自然且时态与后文不一致。应使用“was asked”来表达过去曾被问到的事实，符合英语中询问经历常用的被动过去时。建议：把“quizzed”替换为更常用的“asked”，并使用过去时："I was asked about..."。

× Dance Monkey is my favorite song which never fails to make me come to life and feel thrilled.

✓ "Dance Monkey" is my favorite song, which never fails to make me come alive and feel thrilled.

原句中“come to life”虽非严格错误但在此表示被音乐激活时，英语更常用短语是“come alive”。此外需在歌曲名周围加引号或斜体并在“song”和“which”之间加逗号以分隔定语从句。建议使用更地道表达并注意标点："...song, which never fails to make me come alive..."。

× I even performed it in the singing contest once.

✓ I even performed it in a singing contest once.

原句时态（performed）正确，但冠词使用不当。使用不定冠词“a”更符合英语习惯，表示某次比赛的一次表演。建议将“the singing contest”改为“a singing contest”。

× Guess what? I won first prize.

✓ Guess what? I won first prize.

句子语法正确，时态与语境一致，无需修改。仅标明为正确样例。

× Yes. Every time I take a shower I put on wild music.

✓ Yes. Every time I take a shower, I put on energetic (or lively) music.

“wild music”在英语中不常用来表示“激烈/有活力的音乐”，可能造成歧义或不自然。建议改为更常用且中性词汇如"energetic"或"lively"。另外在时间从句后应加逗号："Every time I take a shower, ..."。

× It fills my mind with exciting rhythms and lyrics.

✓ It fills my mind with exciting rhythms and lyrics.

句子语法正确，形容词用法恰当，无需修改。保留为正确样例。

× As soon as the music starts, I feel like I'm a superstar with dramatic stage moves.

✓ As soon as the music starts, I feel like I'm a superstar with dramatic stage moves.

句子语法正确，代词和结构使用恰当，无需修改。保留为正确样例。