Music— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Expand your answer with a brief reason and an example. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two supporting details using a linking word (for example, because, so, or such as). Keep it natural and concise (no more than 3–4 short sentences). Use slightly more descriptive vocabulary (e.g., uplifting, energetic, mellow).

예시: I prefer happy music because it lifts my mood and helps me stay focused. For example, upbeat pop or electronic songs with lively rhythms make me feel more energetic when I work or exercise.

제안: Give a fuller response by stating how it affects you and when. Use a linking word to connect your topic sentence and an explanatory detail. Avoid one-word answers; aim for 2–3 short sentences that describe the effect and give a specific situation or result.

예시: Yes, it usually makes me feel more excited because the fast tempo and cheerful melodies raise my energy. For instance, I often listen to happy tracks before going to the gym or before social events to boost my mood.

× I prefer happy music.

✓ I prefer happy music.

The sentence is grammatically correct. 'Prefer' is correctly used with the object 'happy music'; subject-verb agreement is correct and word order is appropriate. No changes needed.

× Yes it does.

✓ Yes, it does.

The original phrase is grammatically correct in tense and agreement. The only minor issue is punctuation: a comma should follow 'Yes' in standard written English to separate the interjection from the clause. This is punctuation, not one of the listed grammar problem types, so no grammatical correction is required. Suggestion: add a comma after 'Yes' when writing: 'Yes, it does.'