Music— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Make the reply more grammatical, concise and give a brief reason or example. Use a clear topic sentence, correct verb agreement, and one supporting detail linked with a connector (e.g., "because" or "so"). Avoid redundancy and keep it under five sentences.

예시: I enjoy both sad and happy music because it depends on my mood. For example, I listen to sad songs when I want to relax and reflect, but I choose upbeat music when I need motivation.

제안: Use a slightly more formal tone, avoid casual fillers like "Yeah," and combine ideas with linking words. Provide a concise reason or brief example to support your statement. Keep it to one or two sentences.

예시: Yes, happy music makes me feel more excited and energetic because its fast tempo and uplifting melodies boost my motivation, for instance when I exercise at the gym.

× I love to listen to music and I think I like both sad and happy music, but it always depend upon my mood.

✓ I love to listen to music and I think I like both sad and happy music, but it always depends on my mood.

The verb 'depend' must agree with the singular subject 'it', so use the third person singular form 'depends' (Grammar problem type ID 27). Also, the preposition 'upon' is acceptable but less natural than 'on'; this is a style suggestion (related to preposition use, ID 11). Use 'depends on' for natural, correct phrasing.

× Yeah, happy music makes me feel very excited and energetic whenever I am doing some work or I'm in a gym.

✓ Yeah, happy music makes me feel very excited and energetic whenever I am doing some work or I'm at the gym.

Use the preposition 'at' with 'gym' to refer to being present in that place; 'in a gym' is possible but 'at the gym' is more natural when speaking about one's regular activity (Grammar problem type ID 11). Additionally, 'I'm at the gym' matches conversational usage and the tense of the sentence.