Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is brief and grammatically correct, but too short and lacks detail. To improve, give a short topic sentence and then add one or two supporting details (reason, memory or consequence). Use a linking word to connect ideas and keep it to no more than 3–4 sentences.

예시: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child. My family couldn't afford one, so I usually walked to school instead. However, I sometimes borrowed my neighbour's bike at weekends, which was fun and helped me learn basic cycling skills.

제안: The first sentence answers directly, but the follow-up is unclear and contains errors (word choice and grammar). Improve by giving a clear reason or example, using correct vocabulary, and linking ideas. Avoid vague phrases and check possessives and plural forms. Keep it within 2–3 sentences.

예시: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because they are affordable and convenient for short trips. For example, many people commute to work or school on simple city bicycles or electric bikes, especially in crowded urban areas.

× Many people's buys like Crossfire Bulletin.

✓ Many people buy bikes like the Crossfire Bulletin.

The original sentence has several errors: 'people's buys' incorrectly uses the possessive form and the noun 'buys' (Grammar problem type ID 14 - Incorrect use of quantifiers and 12 - Incorrect use of pronouns/possessive). It should be 'people buy' to form a correct plural subject with a present simple verb. Also 'Crossfire Bulletin' likely refers to a bike model and needs the article 'the' or no article depending on meaning; 'the Crossfire' or 'Crossfire bikes' would be clearer. The corrected sentence uses present simple tense to match the question about general popularity and replaces the incorrect possessive and noun with the correct subject-verb structure. Suggestion: use 'people' (plural subject) + base verb for general truths (people buy), avoid using possessive 'people's' unless indicating possession (e.g., people's bikes), and ensure the noun 'buy' is used as a verb here.