Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời ngắn gọn nhưng chưa tự nhiên và có lỗi nhỏ về ngữ pháp/diễn đạt. Nên trả lời trực tiếp bằng một câu chủ đề đầy đủ, tránh lặp từ và bổ sung một hoặc hai chi tiết ngắn gọn (tại sao bạn thích xe đạp, ai cho bạn, hoặc bạn đã làm gì với nó). Giữ tối đa 5 câu và dùng liên từ khi thêm thông tin.

예시: Yes, I did. I got a small red bike as a gift when I was seven, and I loved riding it around my neighborhood. It helped me become more independent and I often rode it to visit friends after school.

제안: Câu trả lời chứa nhiều lỗi từ vựng và ngữ pháp (nhầm 'buys'/'bikes', 'unaffordable' dùng sai, 'rise by to' lỗi động từ/giới từ) và thiếu tính mạch lạc. Nên bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sửa từ vựng chính xác, giải thích lý do cụ thể (chi phí, tiện lợi, tắc đường) và đưa ví dụ rõ ràng. Dùng liên từ như 'because' hoặc 'for example' đúng chỗ để nối ý. Giữ 2–3 câu hỗ trợ tối đa.

예시: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because they are affordable and convenient for short trips. For example, many students cycle to school every day since traffic is often heavy and buses can be crowded or unreliable.

× Yes, I had. I had a bike when I was seven years old.

✓ Yes, I did. I had a bike when I was seven years old.

The short answer to a past tense question uses the auxiliary 'did' rather than repeating the main verb 'had'. Use 'Yes, I did' for clarity and grammaticality. Suggestion: answer past-tense yes/no questions with 'did' plus the base form or use the full sentence 'Yes, I had a bike when I was seven years old.'

× Yes, I think buys are very popular in my country because they are unaffordable and convenient ways to travel short distance.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country because they are affordable and convenient ways to travel short distances.

Several word choice and form errors: 'buys' is a misspelling of 'bikes'; 'unaffordable' contradicts context so should be 'affordable'; 'short distance' needs plural 'short distances' when speaking generally. Suggestion: check spelling and meaning, and use plural for general countable situations.

× For example, many children and teenagers rise by to school every day, especially since traffic is heavy and public transport can be reliable.

✓ For example, many children and teenagers ride bikes to school every day, especially since traffic is heavy and public transport can be unreliable.

Multiple errors: 'rise by to' is incorrect — the correct verb is 'ride' (or 'ride bikes') and the preposition 'to' should directly follow 'ride' when indicating destination. Also context implies public transport may be unreliable, not 'can be reliable'. Suggestion: use the correct verb 'ride' for bicycles, place the preposition correctly ('ride to school'), and ensure meaning matches context ('unreliable' if that's intended).