Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more natural and grammatically correct, give a clear topic sentence, and add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid unclear phrases like “lighter bike” and “and about.”

예시: Yes, I did. When I was a child I rode a small blue bicycle with my best friend Jenny every day after school. We rode to the park and raced each other along quiet streets, which helped me become confident and fit.

제안: Provide a full, grammatically correct response that directly answers the question, use linking words to explain reasons, and give a specific example or contrast. Correct sentence fragments and article/use errors (e.g., "doesn't have a lot bike lines").

예시: Not really. In my city most people prefer motorbikes or cars because there are few dedicated bike lanes. For example, I rarely see commuters cycling to work, since traffic and the lack of safe cycling paths make it impractical.

× When I was a kid I used lighter bike with my best friend Jenny every day after school because we were really keen on riding a bike and about.

✓ When I was a kid I used a lighter bike with my best friend Jenny every day after school because we were really keen on riding bikes.

Errors: missing article before 'lighter bike' and incorrect preposition/phrase 'keen on riding a bike and about'. Use 'used a lighter bike' with the indefinite article for a singular countable noun (Grammar problem type 22: Article errors) and 'keen on' requires a noun or gerund phrase; 'riding bikes' is natural. Also remove the extraneous word 'about'. Suggestion: include appropriate articles for singular countable nouns and follow 'keen on' with a gerund or noun. Note: This correction addresses article and preposition/phrase misuse listed in the provided grammar problem types.

× Not really. In my city people tend to. Drive their motorbike or cars because in my country doesn't have a lot bike lines.

✓ Not really. In my city people tend to drive motorbikes or cars because my country doesn't have many bike lanes.

Errors: sentence broken by an unnecessary period causing a fragment ('people tend to.'), incorrect capitalization ('Drive'), incorrect noun forms ('motorbike or cars' mixes singular and plural), wrong word order and missing subject in 'because in my country doesn't have', and incorrect quantifier and noun ('a lot bike lines'). Corrections: combine into one sentence without the period, use lower-case 'drive', use consistent plural 'motorbikes or cars', include the subject 'my country' before 'doesn't have', and use 'many bike lanes' (correct quantifier and plural noun). Suggestion: avoid sentence fragments, ensure subject is present before verbs, use consistent pluralization, and choose correct quantifiers for countable nouns.